Saint-Paul-De-Vence is not very far from Nice in France. This is a photo which could overview the town there.
I took this in the morning, at about 9 sth am. Colours in the picture are not really sharp and I did not really take it in a certain angle or composition as I was walking along with my school group.
Please comment on it and give some advice for improvement! =D
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jluca (10377) 2006-03-08 4:47
yes you had the good idea ta take this picture early in the morning but i think something which can attract the eye is missing on it. I find it a bit too flat and there's too much sky. For a better composition, you should use "the rule of the thirds". If you want to privilege the sky, put the limit at the first third from the bottom else from the top. In this case you should have put it at the first third from the top.
Furthermore, the top of the tree in foreground is not welcome here : it's a big dark spot.
In addition, when you will feel well with post-processing, you would improve the sky and make it less foggy.
Hope this can give you basis to improve you pictures in the future.
Porteplume (3393) 2006-03-17 8:27
Bonjour Clare & Welcome on TrekEarth! :o)
* NOTE: Thank you a lot for having made the correction, it helps us a lot to keep the data lists as precise as possible.
Amicalement - Viviane aka Porteplume
PS: If you hesitate about spelling or location in France please check Quid - Villes & Villages de France.