Photographer’s Note
This photograph came all alone, a morning I awaited the first rays of the sun on the sea and for my greater happiness these children undoubtedly came for a hunting to the treasure on the dam while laughing themselves.
I requested very extremely and they entered within the framework.
Pretty vacation camps
Thank you mom, thank you dad
Every year, I would like that that r' starts
You kaïdi aïdi aïda.
I write small to you stammers
For step which you take of pimpernel
Here one is with the p' tits onions
I have that eight years but I manage
I cough a little because one swallows
The smoke of the factory of at side
But it is opposite that one will play
In the garbage dump.
For becqu' for the third time one puts to us at ease
It is really as at the house
The faillots it is true concrete
I have the stomach like a cliff
The morning one will make the dustbins
The supervisors are not malicious
They whirr the three quarters of time
Considering which is round like tails of shovels.
Yesterday, I slipped of on a chair
In f' sant wee in the wash-hand basin
I have the chin in handlebar of bicycle
And three canines with the Lachaise Father
The punishments are rather hard
The pawn it does not have its similar
Y attaches us in full sun
Very naked smeared jam.
To bathe it is the quiet corner
One is only the person goes there
One will soak oneself in a p' tit arm
Where the sewers leave the city
Appears that one has all the typhusse
There is the very boutonneux ptrus
And the evening before putting itself at the piles
One counts with that which will have more.
I send my expensive father and mother to you
My the most distinguished kisses
I leave you there I will see my been engaged
An old woman whom has at least her ten banks
The p' tits there is not really a chance
One never makes us travel
But the big girls go to Tangier
In other vacation camps.
P.perret
tuffellow, jhonny_blue, summer89, nwoehnl, avigur_11, ChrisJ, elihesamian, sn00zie, naxius has marked this note useful
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tuffellow
(533) 2004-07-16 3:40
I would love to know how you took this picture! Did you use any filters or different lenses? Those are some amazing colours. With the silouettes of the kids, it becomes a masterpiece! WOW! Well done. This is definitely going in my favorites! Thanks!
papagolf21
(56483) 2004-07-16 4:18
Comme colonie de vacances, il ne faut pas se plaindre. Le cadre n'est pas désagréable, et :
- Tous les ans, je voudrais que ça r'commence
You kaïdi aïdi aïda.
Prière exaucée, photo très réussie, couleurs très chaudes, malgré l'heure matinale ;-))
Très belle prise de vue Hassan.
jhonny_blue
(4954) 2004-07-16 4:45
Fantastic shot Hassan ! Wonderful sunset, beautiful colours and sea, but the best here are the shadows of the people ! Perfect !
chinchini
(27659) 2004-07-16 5:00
Là je te reconnais entre mille Hassan. Et en chantant !
L'or attirera toujours les convoitises. Et là, j'espère un jour y arriver ;-))
Amicalement/Pierre
ma-tibou
(4566) 2004-07-16 8:05
Très jolie photo, ces couleurs orangées sont magnifiques, et la cerise sur le gâteau en ombres chinoises les gamins , très belle réalisation. Bravo Hassan.Campoloro (taverna, houps!!!!, moi je pensais qu'il était sur la commune de Moriani) Milles excuses.Gentil petit clin d'oeil à Pierre Perret.
miguel
(1854) 2004-07-16 12:34
Un splendide lever de soleil sur la Tyrrhenienne qui prend des allures de mer tropicale avec ces couleurs chaudes.
La silhouette des enfants lui apporte un brin de magie supplémentaire.
Bravo.
loupiot
(3909) 2004-07-16 13:13
Très joli levé de soleil Hassan. Les couleurs sont chaudes, et les multiples petits détails (le voilier et les enfants) apportent beaucoup à la composition. Bien vu.
harold
(2271) 2004-07-16 13:43
Et oui Hassan la chance nous tend les bras quelques fois . Jolies teintes. Beau résultat.
Georges
(11183) 2004-07-16 14:23
La chanson ma permis de prendre ma guitare et de fredonner ce petit air que j'avais oublié ;-))
Tres bonne silouhette Hassan mais j'aime plus particulierement l'equilibre de ton cliché ou le regard se promene trés bien de gauche a droite.
Bravo Hassan
Rockyboy
(20580) 2004-07-16 14:48
Cette chanson me rappelle toujours le temps où j'étais en mouvement de jeunesse...
Quant à la photo, cette composition me rappelle un peu une que j'ai fait au Mexique (pas encore publiée) mais les couleurs n'ont rien à voir avec celles que j'ai. Ici, l'on ressent un énorme chaleur. Bravo!
nwoehnl
(120) 2004-07-16 16:19
This sunrise scene with the lonely boat and the shoreline at the right would already have been spectacular for its composition, sun reflection, and color setting. But the children silhouettes really take it to the next level. Outstanding shot, Hassan.
avigur_11
(21301) 2004-07-16 17:25
Aa great sunrise shot, Hassan, there are not so many surise shots on TE, only a few early wakers, I guess. Your note is very poeti, as always, and those children silhouettes are very dynamic and add so much to this lovely image.
ChrisJ
(70335) 2004-07-17 3:32
The silhouettes of the children against the wonderful orange sky are great.
Jean-Luc
(5488) 2004-07-17 5:10
Bravo pour les colonies de vacances, heureusement que la photo n'a rien à voir avec les paroles de la chanson..
Et bien sûr que c'est beau et que cela nous émerveille..qu'elle est belle la nature. Pourtant tout semble si fragile comme ce voilier perdu dans l'immense couleur si chaude. ;-o
yesterday
(9787) 2004-07-17 15:08
Beautiful sunset, great orange color and light, excellent contrast, good compoced.
Regards Kaj Nielsen
ngugu (51) 2004-07-19 1:54
Une composition parfaite et chaleureuse. J'adore l'équilibre entre les roches à droite et le reflet du soleil à gauche. Bravo !
dominique
(11403) 2004-07-20 18:21
Beau travail une composition de rêve avec ce bateau et les enfants a droite , les couleurs sont amazing , naturelle ou pas parceque le matin ca il peut y avoir un ton orange comme cela . Bref une belle photo .
elihesamian
(26091) 2004-07-21 8:55
Well done hassan,Great work,very nice catch,great playing with colors you had,very fine,excellent composition you managed.
what a great note!
I need time for read it,let me back to your note:)
Thanks for sharing.
sn00zie
(2384) 2004-07-24 8:23
superb picture. what colors-- Woof! amazingggg.. have no words. seriously-did u use any filters??? the colors are toooo amazing to be captured without any. the silhoutte was a really good touch
naxius
(16679) 2004-08-08 5:26
This is a terrific snapshot you have posted HAssan! The colors are definitly good, the composition is great with the children on the right part, the DOF is good sa weel. A very good job indeed! Alexandre








