Parisian breakfest, a photo from Ile-de-France, North

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Paris, Beaubourg, 8 am.

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polter (7239) 2009-03-15 15:54

Wyzywająca ta biel po lewej. I w pierwszej chwili zatyka, budzi niepokój... Ale skojarzenia biegną poprzez długie włosy, wystrzępione nogawki spodni i sandały ku postaciom pustelników... I pustka nabiera sensu ;))
A samo zdjęcie fajne bardzo z tą w strzelisty trójkąt zamknięta postacią i swoją symetrią osiową.
Pozdrowienia i dobranoc T.

g_panakia (4031) 2009-03-15 17:31

hi grazyna,
expressive posture
i like the way he looks at your camera
tfs
georgia

KevRyan (22924) 2009-03-15 18:26

I haven't seen flared trousers that big for many a year - I too like the slightly off beat way he is looking at you but above all the repeat pattern of the steps leading to a classic triangular composition so tightly framed works well for me - even the wavy lines leading the eye back up the frame contribute very nicely - a really good intelligent composition!

bw Kev

Polonaise (5796) 2009-03-15 21:16

You know him ?
You know all of them... Those people in your photos ?
This is incredibe.
Your city talks with the faces of your people in there...
Because they are 'your' people, Grazyna...
No doubt in my mind...
The highest class street photography there is...

Easily number one there is...

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jasmis (57596) 2009-03-15 23:16

Mocne, na Twoim wysokim poziomie. Ludzie, życie, Paryż...
Pozdrawiam.

faubry (35335) 2009-03-16 2:33

bonjour Grazyna, une photo avec une "smart" présentation! superbe cadrage, bravo vraiment pour tes photos de Paris, photos sociologiques
passe une bonne journée
nous sommes arrière grand parents!!!
bises
francine

hulkimuradi (154) 2009-03-16 2:51

hi:))
that's good exposure.
What do you think about left side free space.?
regards
hulki

bantonbuju (51733) 2009-03-16 10:04

ty mi napisz prosze co tam majtrujesz przy tych zdjeciac z tym sciesnianiem ich po bokach bo mi sie to "filmowanie" bardzo podoba...

juz o tym pisalem niedawno....

pozd. j.

MrCairo (0) 2009-03-16 15:21

No no prosze Pani !!
Za dnia, bez papierosa za to z jogurcikiem - samo zdrowie.
Kadr przejmujacy, czysty. Taki bezpośredni.
Bez dwu zdan - masz wplyw na ludzi !

Czarujace !

Pozdrawiam z zakamarkow wieczoru
Wojtek

michelloupis (0) 2009-03-18 18:51

Hello Grazyna,

I was speechless with your frame. How can such a photographer of your caliber with such a magnificent sense for composition and aesthetic allow herself such a monstrosity?

Love the picture. Beautiful! Hate the frame. A disgrace!

Hope you like my workshop.... tomorrow. I had to do something :-)

All the best

n.

ben4321 (9875) 2009-03-22 11:05

Hmmm, I'm not sure about the frame either, but I am sure about the photo - I think it's excellent.
Aside from your photogenic subject, what I like is the way his posture forms an almost perfect triangle. That triangle, and the steps leading up to him, really draw the eye straight to his face.
Good stuff Grazyna!

Cheers,
Ben