Cubic Photo | TrekEarth

Photographer’s Note

Apparently ugly old and desaffected factory but i found interesting the graphic and colors of the buildings.

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umbrellaphotos (1901) 2004-08-11 10:45

I like the composition of the industrial like buildings being tied together through the bridge.

Cosa (39) 2004-08-11 14:10

I love the subject matter. The clouds in the background are nice too.

I find myself wanting two things. 1) Because of the 'cubism' you're trying to capture, I think I would like to have seen the picture taken from a straight-on angle. This would erase the depth of the building on the right, which would be a shame, but it would put the catwalk on a line paralell to the ground. I think I'd prefer the straight lines, personally.

2) I find myself wanting to see the ground. I can't tell if you're 20 stories up (which the clouds may imply) or on ground level. Some context might be good.

Overall, though, I like it.

spoon (171) 2005-02-11 12:21

I'd keep it just as it is. If u'd follow Cosa's instruction it would be quite shallow I think.This is more like abstract painting.Well done!