where to go? Photo

Photographer’s Note

Where can I go that my heart won't follow?

To be some place where my heart won't know.

The sensations that lie so deep within me

You awoke and they just won't go.

Is it because we are like cells divided?

Is it because our souls have touched?

I have distant dreams of the answer.

Could it be from a time we shared so much?

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Dianchen (189) 2007-01-14 4:44 [Comment]

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noahsark (1092) 2007-01-14 5:28

Hi Grzegorz,

I like the composition and colors of this photo. It feels like it needs to be a bit sharper though. But well done!

Mahmut K.

dsidwell (9745) 2007-01-14 11:09

Hello Grzegorz. I like the poem; did you write it? It matches the photo perfectly, which I see as a visual poem. THe softness and grain add so much emotion to this. Very nice!

manada (6237) 2007-01-22 1:33

This is art, the fog and trees, man...
Very good.

Freddy

AdrienneClaire (718) 2007-01-29 4:56

Your poem is so touching and thought provoking to go along with the chilling photograph. Beautiful work.