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Copyright: Gerrit van der Linden (Gerrit) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4340 W: 88 N: 5401] (26795)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-06
Camera: Canon EOS 400 D
Exposure: f/4, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-28 12:51
Viewed: 1450
Points: 88
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Running a shop in a little village in Jamaica is real fun, like this woman shows.
She was just serving customers with a smile when I asked her if I could take a picture of the shop with her in it.
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  • Fis2 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2561 W: 141 N: 1678] (34549)
  • [2008-04-28 13:14]

Witaj Gerrit!
I like this Daily Life shot. Very interesting colors. I like the frame and POV. Well done.
Regards
Krzysztof

Well Gerrit, it actually looks like it had been a slow, boring day for her... but you said there were customers there... maybe she was wondering if you'd buy anything... I especially like the repetition of the Pepsi motif here, pity you caught the one on the right just partially... well done and TFS, Daniel

Hallo Gerrit,
Ik ben eechte Coca Cola drinker, dus deze Pepsi tent is dan ook niet aan mij besteed ;-) Leuk he dit soort mensen die saai de dagen voorbij zien gaan zonder enige activiteit en zich heerlijk lopen te vervelen. Mooi opgezet in de manier hoe de vrouw kijkt...leuke plaat.
Groet, Henk

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  • parbo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1839 W: 15 N: 2097] (7549)
  • [2008-04-28 18:31]

Hello Gerrit,

Great shot with messy inside of store. Her natural pose -little sleepy maybe- adds great value. Beautiful contrasts, very good shoot. Congratulations.

Best Regards,

Ertugrul

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  • gunbud Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 4706 W: 4 N: 4327] (19510)
  • [2008-04-28 18:36]

Hi Gerrit,
She dosenn't look too thrilled to be behind the counter serving customers. I'll bet she would rather be at the beach. Very clear details and clear warm colors to this interesting shot.
Regards, Tom

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  • zeca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3063 W: 162 N: 4435] (18572)
  • [2008-04-28 20:49]

Hi Gerrit!
I really like to get into this kind of places where everything is curious. So we can have some fun looking to your picture's details! Thank you for sharing this!
Regards,
Zeca

Hello Gerrit
Une photo pleine d'humour. Une bonne image de vie quotidienne avec l'intérieur de ce petit magasin. Pas beaucoup d'article et pas forcément de sourire, mais sûrement plus de vie que dans un supermarché!!
Du bon travail!!
Amicalement
hervé

Bonsoir, cher Gerrit,
Je ne puis m'empêcher de sourire en voyant cette femme tenant le magasin ! son attitude est très cool ! les affaires ne doivent pas être florissantes, à moins que celle-ci attendît un car de touristes.
Une très bonne image, pleine d'humour.
Amitiés.
Philippe

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  • delkoo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4016 W: 239 N: 5321] (26013)
  • [2008-04-29 1:42]

hi gerrit
she seems a bit disappointed and bored, your portrait job is good and shows very well your sensitivity in general and in particular when approaching people.

regards
didier

Hi Gerrit,
Funny with this boring attitude, well taken, good light and colours.

Hello Gerrit,
Very interesting and well captured daily life shot and together an excellent portrait!

greetings,
Thomas

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  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8566 W: 915 N: 11534] (57432)
  • [2008-04-29 5:14]

Hi Gerrit

A good daily life scene from Jamaica with excellent colour & sharpness. Well managed interior lighting. Tfs!

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  • belido Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3436 W: 103 N: 2808] (10027)
  • [2008-04-29 5:58]

HI Gerrit,

what a funny shot. The woman doesn't look happy you the shot indeed. I like to see all the colorful elements...all that to make the image happier than the main subject..hehehe. Well done!
Regards,
Carlos

Did you ask her to look fed up or maybe she didn't want her photo taken? ;D It is very interesting to look at all the details. We don't see many shops like this nowadays.
Well done
Kath

Lots of colour here Gerrit. The woman looks bored out of her mind. Are you sure she is having fun? Maybe she is tired of having her picture taken :))
Phil

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  • Cricri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4690 W: 232 N: 6469] (31005)
  • [2008-04-29 7:48]

Hi Gerrit,
Oh la pauvre elle a l'air de s'ennuyée tellement que pour finir elle va s'endormir, elle rest complétement indifférente malgré l'appareil photo!!
amusant sa position et son regard :-))
Have a nice day
cricri

Een geestige zeer bijpassende titel, zo te zien verveelt ze zich stierliek Gerrit, kaar zaak mooi uitgelicht, de kleuren zijn pico-bello.
groet
Henk

Hi Gerrit!

Not in a very cheerful your "model" but this is real everyday life, what can we do? Excellent, natural portrait, great and colourful environent. Congratulations!

Hercules

Bonjour Guerrit, en lisant ta note tu décris l’endroit comme amusant, alors que là en voyant le regard et l’attitude décontractée de la femme, l’on croirai quelle va s’endormir debout, c’est très surprenant comme photo de portrait, outre le portrait se serai plutôt les yeux qui sont titré et ne demandent qu’a s’endormir, très belle scène de vie quotidienne, bien amicalement

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  • daddo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1770 W: 31 N: 1908] (8473)
  • [2008-04-29 17:30]

Hi Gerrit. Not sure if you were ironic about her smile towards her customers. If it's true, then this bored, resigned look must be reserved for foreigners with a camera.Anyway, she looks like a bird in a cage- those cages where one puts bright objects to amuse the occupants. Nice details and a true slice of life. Regards. Klaudio.

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  • Graal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4877 W: 132 N: 525] (44865)
  • [2008-04-29 23:57]

Hi Gerrit,
fine scene and boring mood on the face of seller. An interesting interior. Good reportage. Well done picture.
Gr., Aleksander

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  • TopGeo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2183 W: 79 N: 3022] (13618)
  • [2008-04-30 0:41]

Hello Gerrit,
Very interesting and well image this daily life captured!Tis composition have an excellent portrait of woman with expression in the face!
I like the frame colours and POV.
bravo

greetings,
Georgios

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  • Rosa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 587 W: 142 N: 915] (4118)
  • [2008-04-30 3:02]

Bonjour Guerrit,
Un regard et une attitude décontractée de cette femme, qui semble s’endormir debout, elle a vraiment l'air de s'ennuyer ! et c’est surprenant comme photo de portrait, belle scène de vie quotidienne.
Amitiés,
Rosa.

Hello Gerrit,
joy and enthusiasm by work:) It is seen and nicely put well in image. Cheer.
Have a nice day
Cordially
Joël

Hi Gerrit,
what a difference of behaviour in that case. Selling with a smile and offering a tired face in the moment of the capture. So we must go there and have a drink for her smile.
Lieben Gruss, Ulf

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  • carper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 9712 W: 446 N: 15806] (55938)
  • [2008-04-30 10:42]

de title is well choosen Gerrit.
ze straalt het ook helemaal uit, de fun. goede foto,ik denk dat je een prachtige tijd daar hebt meegemaakt. prettige dag verder.
groet Jaap

Hi Gerrit again, you captured her and she stays very calm and with her natural pose at the moment!-:)
She looks superb
Have a nice evening.
Evangelos

LOL ,
She should like Coca-Cola instead , eh ? If enthusiasm could be pictured on a photo , that sure was the day ;-)) !

Very funny shot.

François ,

Bonsoir Gerrit
une belle photo qui colle bien à la période en cette veille de la fête du travail ;o)) J'aime beaucoup cette motivation. Bien vu !
amicalement
Xavier

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  • danyy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 7575 W: 447 N: 10656] (54226)
  • [2008-04-30 14:46]

Bonjour Gerrit,
il manque un peu de reggae alors pour donner à la scène une alllure plus festive. Ce ne doit pas être marrant de tenir ce genre de commerce, tout dépend des relations avec les clients.
Regards.
Daniel.

Hi Gerrit,
So this is her happy face ... I wonder what would be her grumpy face ... possibly customers will be too scared to buy :) Great daily life capture though ... I like the vibrant crispy colors. Well captured and presented. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1629 W: 118 N: 2870] (9774)
  • [2008-04-30 18:37]

hello Gerrit

Interesting shot during your travel to this sundry shop. In rural places, the business is very often family run and the work is just part of income earning while also to pass the time. Business such as this has no target sales pressure, nor any other factor, simply enough income to make a living, not really into making a lot of money.

Perhaps this type of work is not as fun as photography but at least they will be comfortable at home ground.

tfs, bill

LOL!!!
Fun? I can't see any fun here but a huge bored face of a lady that is almost ready to fall asleep ... I guess she needs to have some Pepsi to wake up and be more communicative and catch the attention of people that get into the store. Great and funny daily life scene!
Peter

Hi Gerrit, fascinating daily life shoot, great portrait with lovely expression, great colorful composition, very well done, ciao Silvio

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  • dip Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1732 W: 0 N: 936] (9128)
  • [2008-05-01 13:16]

Hi Gerrit,
excellent capture of the scene!
good clarity and lighting,very well done!
Greetings,
Dimitris.

Hello Gerrit.
She doesn't seem to excited with her job, I think 5 minutes more and she would fell asleep over the balcony.
Nevertheless this is a nice portrait with her funny face and attitude well framed in the middle of the busy background of the store.
Cheers.
Paulo

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  • Truja Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 674 W: 90 N: 1456] (4946)
  • [2008-05-01 13:57]

Hi Gerrit,
decidedly it wasn't the happiest day of the life of this woman. Its gesture of boredom is very expressive. Great moment !
Very peculiar all the details that surround to the girl. Excellent colors.

Salut,

Jordi

Hi Gerrit,
Yep agree, you could have saved that one for May 1st ! The bored attitude of the woman makes the picture, although we could also enjoy it for her environment, seems like pepsi salesmen were very active here !
Have a nice day JY

salut gerrit
elle a l'air de vraiment "s'emmerder" la dame et c'est pas un photographe qui l'a dérange, beau travail sur la lumiére sans flash
amitiés
gilbert

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1883 W: 53 N: 750] (12015)
  • [2008-05-03 13:51]

Very interesting looking store. This ladies expression is quite cute :) Very nice and detail. TFS

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  • siolaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3947 W: 403 N: 6700] (23015)
  • [2008-05-04 0:13]

Hi Gerrit,
She doesn't seem to have much fun, but I like her unimpressed expression! That is a good docu shot of Jamaican daily life.
The flash didn't do any damge and colors and expo are fine.
Greetings
Laurent

Hello Gerrit,
Frankly, is she really having fun? Looks like bored to me, hehehe!
Good documentary of the tradition with small shops selling about everything, I notice this lady is selling rum too...
Nicely framed with many details to explore!
Greetings,
Pablo -

:-) OK-

Hello Gerrit,
I like this one.
I like all this colourful things hanged on these walls behind the lady.
And of course her bored expression is fabulous.
Funny title for this photo.
regards
Teresa

Hoi buurtje,
perfecte titel voor een schitterende foto!
Als je nog meer van dit soort shots wilt nemen zonder dat je helemaal naar Jamaica hoeft te reizen, moet je effe naar de kroeg bij mij hieronder... LOL!!!
Terug naar je plaatje : mooie kleuren, sfeervol, prima definitie, helemaal top.
De groeten uit een zonnige & zeer luie Czaar Peter!

Fulvio.

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  • zmey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1363 W: 102 N: 1393] (5398)
  • [2008-05-15 4:54]

hello geritt

lol. the expression on that shop assistant's face says anything BUT excitement... she might as well be a good representative for soviet time supermarket merchant's from 1970-s: full of contempt for customers :)) but yes, lack of customers would be the reason too. that aside, a very realistic, down to the earth capture. i like it, friend. i remember similar stores from my bahama trip of the last year.

warm regards,
kristaps

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