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Copyright: Gerrit van der Linden (Gerrit) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4340 W: 88 N: 5401] (26795)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-01-28
Camera: Canon EOS 400 D, Tamron 18-200mm f/3.5-6.3 XR Di II
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-16 23:54
Viewed: 1671
Points: 64
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Four scoolgirls trying to reach the other side of the road. Traffic is not as bad and reckless in Jamaica compared with other couyuntries in the region that I've visited but congestion is the standard in every towncentre. like her in May Pen, 50 km west of Kingston.
Schooluniforms are a major topivc in daily streetlife, although uniformity in colour is not entirely reached here. The are taking care for each other though.

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  • siolaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3947 W: 403 N: 6700] (23015)
  • [2008-04-16 23:57]

Hi Gerrit
They look quite worried, but i dont know if there is that much traffic in that place! Nice natural poses, sunny colors and sharp details
Greetings
Laurent

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  • daddo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1770 W: 31 N: 1908] (8473)
  • [2008-04-16 23:59]

Hi gerrit. Interesting topic with the various expressions and gestures. I like your observation about the uniform-ity of colour. Nice light and additional details one gets from the background. Regards. Klaudio.

A really nice street-photo here Gerrit, especially I like the look of the man in background, well captured, compliments!!

have a nice day,
Fabio.

later

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1883 W: 53 N: 750] (12015)
  • [2008-04-17 0:44]

A very nice capture of daily life. I like the school uniforms, and wish we had them here. It would put an end to at least abit of the peer pressure. TFS

Hi Gerrit,
that is a nice moment with them taking care of each other. The strong light and the pleasant colours add a good impression in that scene. Good choice of the square format.
Lieben Gruss, Ulf

Hello Gerrit,
A very nice colourful composition of these four young ladies trying to cross the road. I like also like the inclusion of the young man left of frame who seems very interested in the camera or, perhaps, one or more of the girls ;-) Very good clarity. A good slice of daily life.

Hi Gerrit.
As an ex teacher I was quick to see the lack of uniformity in the colour of the tunics! I like the candid nature of this shot, and the colourful background. It would have been easy to over-expose in the sun. The squarish format works well, and the activities in the background add interest. I love that sign, 'Sale! Sale!, which says so much so urgently. All in all, a captivating daily life shot.
Regards,
Andrew

Hi Gerrit,
As it seems people there enjoy a ver colorful environment, and this shows on the photos as well, especially when the light pushes the contrasts and gives punch to the colors, nice street scene.
Have a nice day JY

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  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8566 W: 915 N: 11534] (57432)
  • [2008-04-17 4:09]

hI Gerrit

A good group portrait, & daily life scene, of the schoolgirls & their uniforms, from Jamaica. Wonderful tropical colour, with excelLent sharpness. Tfs!

Hi Gerrit,

That's a beautifull share from Jamaica.
The kids are to cross a traffic... and it's lovely to watch the school uniforms.. Here, in our place, the same style of uniforms are there in schools..
Good shot , and a fine presentation.
All the best.

jp

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  • Truja Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 674 W: 90 N: 1456] (4946)
  • [2008-04-17 6:57]

Hi Gerrit,
Magnificent image of these Jamaican students with the uniforms of the college, overcoat I like the spontaneity of the scene. It is an image of the daily life of these young women, where the colors have a great importance and personality. Excellent quality of image and sheen.

Salut, best regards, Jordi

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  • parbo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1839 W: 15 N: 2097] (7549)
  • [2008-04-17 7:23]

Hello Gerrit,

Very good capture of their life there Gerrit. Yellow facade and part of red one is creates an eye catching looks with their uniforms and natural poses. Congratulations.

Best Regards,

Ertugrul

Hallo Gerrit,
Leuk om die meisjes zo in hun schoolkleding te zien, geeft een prima gevoel weer van het dagelijks leven. Zware diepe kleuren en contrasten, dat mag ik graag zien...prima werk.
Groet, henk

Hello Gerrit,
Very interesting this picture showing a little of daily life of this people.Here, in Brazil most schools use pantas as uniform . We almost never see girls dressing skirt. I like this uniform.
Regards
maria

Hi Gerrit - nice shot with the "Caribbean" strong colors, strong light and daily life. The red/yellow behind is good to complement the brown uniforms (it has been noted that there are indeed different brown tones in the uniforms). Cheers ;) Daniel

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  • Fis2 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2561 W: 141 N: 1678] (34549)
  • [2008-04-17 11:27]

Hej Gerrit!
Beautiful frame, super scoolgirls ;). Good composition and colors. I like the light and sharpness. Well done.
Regards
Krzysztof

Hallo Gerrit,

Swinging Jamaica. Mooie foto die ons goed laat zien dat er meer is dan rum and cocacola and swinging raggea.

goet Rob

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  • leo61 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3746 W: 368 N: 7705] (33742)
  • [2008-04-17 21:26]

Hi Gerrit!
A nice and very colorful shot of these girls.
A good daylifescen,taken under good light.Colors and contrast are great.
Regards,Leo

Hello Gerrit
Les contrastes de couleurs sont superbes sur cette photo très lumineuse.
Une belle scène de vie quotidienne bien saisie.
Du bon travail!!
Amicalement
Hervé

hi gerrit
great daily life showing those young girls going to school and also the vivid colors of the city,
they looks a bit worried!!!


best regards
didier

Gerrit,
A nice street scene, with interesting note.
Your compo is very good, as it allow to focus on the action.
Regards,
JB.

Hello Gerrit,
Very nice daily life scene full in colors of the suroundings...I like how you captured this group of girls...without seeing you!

Have a nice day,
Thomas

ncie portrait of pupils in beautiful colours. Excellent snapshot
Best wishes,
Achim

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  • gunbud Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 4706 W: 4 N: 4327] (19510)
  • [2008-04-18 5:52]

Hi Gerrit,
Vibrantly clear colors with excellent details and sharpness to this capture of the careful shcolgirls. You have managed to capture very serious expressions on the faces of this tight knit group.
Regards, Tom
Tomorrow

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  • dip Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1732 W: 0 N: 936] (9128)
  • [2008-04-18 6:13]

Hi Gerrit,
a good clear and sharp photo,beautiful colors combination,
well captured and composed!
Dimitris.

Gerrit,
nice daily life scene showing the courtesy of helping out each other and friendship. The colors are very strong and typical for my knowledge of Jamaica. They are so strong that it pushes the contrast a lot. Strong impression!
Peter

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  • toto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2464 W: 112 N: 2824] (15044)
  • [2008-04-19 0:25]

Bonsoir,
belle photo de ces jeunes filles qui reviennent de l' ecole.
Bonne netteté de l' ensemble.

Amitiés Thomas
Je reviens

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  • belido Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3436 W: 103 N: 2808] (10027)
  • [2008-04-20 3:37]

Hi Gerrit,

I coudn't leave this without writing something...what a graceful daily life shot. The girls are an eye catcher with their brown clothes against that colroful façades. Well done!
Regards,
Carlos

I would have titled the photo Sale!Sale!, interesting moment of daily life, with a bright colores backdrop.

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  • jasmis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2931 W: 618 N: 3223] (39860)
  • [2008-04-21 1:30]

Amazing group of girls. Very sunny and exotic presentation.
Thanks for sharing.
Regards.

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  • JCG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3487 W: 460 N: 5031] (17982)
  • [2008-04-21 11:16]

Hi Gerrit,

A beautiful scene of street here, I like much the colors of the image which titillates the glance. A beautiful photograph of group on these four girlfriends. Well seen Gerrit and thank you for the note.

With all my friendships and a very good evening,

Jean-Charles

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  • Emile Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4208 W: 144 N: 4609] (16644)
  • [2008-05-11 21:09]

Hola Gerrit.
Very nice daily life scene with the girls in there colorful uniform crossing the street, you captured them very well and you got very good details and colors. Good POV.
Well done.
Best regards.

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