brother and sister Photo

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Maya Children

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duder (319) 2005-09-21 15:31

Hi, you have potentially interesting subject matter here, but there are several things that could have been done to improve this photo. First, it would have been better to shoot more at the eye level of the children instead of looking down. Second, next time try to look at where the shadows are projected on the road so that you can eliminate the ones that aren't useful (such as in the lower left corner) and include others (the children's) that might be. Finally, the lighting is a bit harsh, so that a fill flash might be recommended to bring out more detail in their faces. Cheers.

Davids (1034) 2005-10-09 1:47

Gerrit,

Wat een pragtige foto.
De blik in de ogen van de kinderen is niet echt vrolijk.
Het beeld wordt versterkt door de donkere kleding.
echt prachtig!

elmec (12194) 2006-03-13 14:08

Hello Gerrit!
Love children!
Great cmposition!
Best greetings!

aznegrao (10230) 2006-03-30 10:36

Hi Gerrit!!
Gosto da expressão natural das crianças nativas ao ver um turista neste interessante enquadramento.
Greetings.
friend.
aznegrao,