Nice way to say "No" Photo

Photographer’s Note

When I saw this old women in the Downtown of Punta Gorda, I took his picture, she does not saw me. Latter we start to chat and I asked her, May I take a picture of you? and she took my hand and with a nice samile she say "Tomorrow" and she keep smilig to me.
When I took this pic, I need to be fast other wise she realized I was tooking her, so maybe she can be mad, that is the reason maybe could be out of focus, but for me she looks so beautiful. So I can not just leave her out of Trekearth and don't share this wondeful women with you.

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dgarr (701) 2005-07-31 19:59

I like your story about this woman. This picture is not your best work, but the note really helps. You need to pay attention to you use of gender. You refer to her as "his" in the first sentence of your note.