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at the end of a tough day


at the end of a tough day
Photo Information
Copyright: Mark Panszky (markoci) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 95 N: 396] (3871)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-09-17
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation
Camera: EOS Digital Rebel, Canon 18-55mm EFS, Digital RAW
Exposure: f/4, 1/10 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-10-29 12:39
Viewed: 773
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
i was on my way to a market when i saw this driver taking a rest at a quiet side street... he was happy to oblige when i asked if i could take his photo... (i wish perhaps for more details, but handheld at 1/10s with the kit lense, i'm not complaining..)

continuing my quest for a decent b&w conversion... (posted the colour version as a ws)

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Hi Mark,
Great compo.Love the B/W effects here.Good angle of shooting as well.
Greetings from India,
Dhurjati

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  • pippo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 114 W: 0 N: 64] (588)
  • [2006-10-29 12:41]

Hi Mark
very nice picture, the composition is very good, the smile of a man too

thx for sharing

filippo

Hello Mark ... he seems so happy and relaxed after maybe a long day working hard. I like the black/white but I must say your workshop "edition" with the light is very special too. Barbara.

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  • euryan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1110 W: 121 N: 1769] (7770)
  • [2006-10-29 12:57]

I think this B&W version looks a lot better. Nice job with the conversion. The look on the guys face is perfect and I like his relaxed body language. Great shot. I love the composition.
Regards,
Ryan

1/10 with the kit lens i think you did really good :)))

nice and relaxed moment. Good luck in your quest :))) (although i think it's quite nice)

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  • Darren Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1561 W: 120 N: 1062] (6801)
  • [2006-10-29 18:05]

I think this is a really good conversion, better than on your last upload. Good tones, better details in the shadows, control of the highlights and just the general look all seem good to me. I like the photo too; the strong diagonal works well for me, as does the contented look on his face. Surprisingly sharp considering the shutter speed. I think I wouldn't have minded a slightly lower POV, but it looks good as is. Nice shot Mark.

Reminds me of my tricycle driver from LP shot a bit.

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