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Fish market


Fish market
Photo Information
Copyright: Ricardo Jamin (rjamin) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 96 W: 17 N: 72] (1169)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-11-28
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D1x, 24-85mm/f3.5-4.5 G, Digital JPEG
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Travelogue: Vietnam and Cambodia
Date Submitted: 2003-12-15 7:30
Viewed: 2044
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Fish market at Hoi An.
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  • Great 
  • kazan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 118 W: 59 N: 82] (757)
  • [2003-12-15 7:49]

Very good capture Ricardo, alive and expressive.
Just a comment on the white border... it confuses the eye...
Panos

Very good reportage. Composition is dynamic for a static situation. IMHO the foggy colors of the salesmen should be coorected I did a workshop for fun.

  • Great 
  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2980 W: 89 N: 4012] (21348)
  • [2003-12-16 3:54]

Very good composition. Evrything is well-placed and although I couldn't see the face very clearly, the "fish" is right out there!

  • Good 
  • Opus Gold Star Critiquer [C: 106 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2003-12-28 10:35]

Good scene full of spirit of the place, as they say. I even like your titlted comp here, but it cries out for fill-flash to bring the faces out of that back-lighting.

I love the blood and guts of a fish market.
The people have a sombre look about them, but the composition is good and tight, except for "white shirt" who is cut in half.
Otherwise a good photo, and shoko's workshop gives a bit of a lift to the colours.

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