A peaceful afternoon in idyllic Hoi An. She was leaning against a wall, outside a primary school premise, where an afternoon assembly is being conducted. She stood there for a long while.. perhaps looking lovingly at her own child?
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quetzal (3467) 2005-04-28 4:29
Nice idea and composition. Perhaps this picture could be a little bit more sharp contrasted and cropped ?
Anyway this scene of life is intersting.
rbcy1974 (20758) 2005-04-28 4:31
Really nice picture, I like the contrast between the lady and the wall. I would just crop of so that you can de center the lady.
thebecky (688) 2005-04-28 4:38
Lovely shot, the colours are good and it has a nice feel. I agree with Daniel about the cropping.
highpeak8 (139) 2005-04-28 5:29
Hi Loe, interesting observation. I like the part that we can still see the kids through the openings on the wall. nice colour! just think that the lighting can be just a little higher to bring more richness to the colours.