at the shop

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at the shop
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Copyright: Franco Degani (degani) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 168 W: 0 N: 222] (2137)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-03-27
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Sony DSC-f828
Exposure: f/4, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-03-10 23:24
Viewed: 431
Points: 14
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Hello Franco,

This image look sepia. You framed the scene very well with the women to the right of the frame. The casual street scene is interesting as I wonder what they are talking about. Good details and light. Thanks Franco.

Roberto

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 183 W: 27 N: 66] (1700)
  • [2008-03-11 0:01]

Dear Franco,
a very refined capturing of three women in the noon shop.
their voices in the noisy sound of the street are reaching me out of the picture.
and southern light of the sun fits unexpectedly this sepia tone, perhaps simple air makes this atmosphere...
this feeling reminds me of my childhood, playing in the rough but energetic market.
thank you,
Akihisa

eccoti qua! con un'altra scena piena di atmosfera e di vita
il seppia da un'aria di antioco ricordo alla scena nel suo insieme e accentua l'allegria della venditrice che chiacchiera con le clienti con un grande sorriso. una atmoesfera che sarebbe bello ritorvare nei nostrui mercatiom, ma che pare perduta per sempre...

ciao
anna

Ciao Franco, bella immagine di vita quotidiana con la venditrice dal sorriso accattivante, ottimo viraggio in seppia, bravo, ciao Silvio

Sapiente contrasto di luci e ombre. Il volto della venditrice è gioioso nella sua umiltà.
Veramente bella.

Roberto

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  • lousat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 545 W: 8 N: 376] (3163)
  • [2008-03-11 16:07]

Queste immagini rubate di vita quotidiana mi piacciono tantissimo,quando le faccio ho sempre paura che qualcuno si inc.... eheheh..specialmente nei paesi arabi,le tue donne sembrano invece non farsi problemi,complimenti per la scelta del tono seppia,buona giornata,Luciano

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  • jorgi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 705 W: 124 N: 474] (2153)
  • [2008-03-11 23:21]
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Hi Franco,

it is interesting to compare images that go with a word shop from Da Nang and any other western city. It is hard to believe how different they are. But I must say I prefer this one. Why? Because of this friendly atmosphere, girls taking time to chitchat, ful of domestic touch and warm ambient. You stressed that nice feeling with sephia tone and make even warmer. Excellent daily life scene.

Kind regards,
Jeri

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