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Sequence of expressions


Sequence of expressions
Photo Information
Copyright: Ricardo Jamin (rjamin) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 96 W: 17 N: 72] (1169)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-11-28
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D1x, 24-85mm/f3.5-4.5 G, Digital RAW
Photo Version: Original Version
Travelogue: Vietnam and Cambodia
Date Submitted: 2003-12-13 4:19
Viewed: 2965
Points: 19
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Took this photo at Hoi An market. I dont know what were they discussing, but I find the old lady expressions very interesting.
The sequence presented here is in order from left to right. Looking at my EXIF file, the sequence captured here spans over 22 seconds


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Well captured Ricardo! Good PJ. Her gestures are priceless, I especially the one when she puts her hands over her face. Maybe the person standing is asking for directions, when the old lady has her hands in her face she's trying to remember how to find the place.

Of course quality could have been better but I guess you shot this in video mode. I'm glad you shared.

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Oh, now I see the larger version, really good.

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  • Luko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2706 W: 503 N: 2854] (13479)
  • [2003-12-13 5:49]
  • [3]

I was wondering why you deleted that one yesterday and hoped you'd upload it once more.

I'd just resume my initial comments :
- the idea only deserves two points, it's like a video but...in still mode...
- I think frame 3 should make the better start while frame 2 will adequately close the pic,
- frame 1 is not in the same rythm as the others.

I think it's a really good idea and you've captured the expression well.

Ricardo, this is just wonderful and very unique. The expressions on her face are priceless and you captured them all very, very well.

Looks like there was some serious haggling going on.

Its a clever and original idea - almost like a comic strip.

This large photo is nice, the expressions on this person face are indeed interesting. The colors and details are nice. But the inscriptions at the bottom are not elegant at all IMO.

Excellent idea, very well executed. The series of shots really looks like a movie to me. The expression on the old lady is amazing. Very well done.

Very interesting work. I agree with Luko about the sequence beginning at #3. The sequence suffers too of a certain lack of definition but is a nice document of a life-day of Daily Life at a Market ... I wish to be able to do such a nice composition ..

really captured a moment in daily life !

Excellent serial! It's like a no comment documental! You are invited to visit my Vietnamese album and others. Regards.

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