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The beach
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| Photo Information |
| Copyright: rs chi (chi) (964) |
| Genre: Places |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2007-09 |
| Categories: Nature |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2007-10-06 4:37 |
| Viewed: 1107 |
| Favorites: 1 [view] |
| Points: 6 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
| Used by Hasselblad 500cm/120mm/f16/blackcard/Kodak E100VS film |
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Sunsets are always good but an industrial background is not good and the black blob in the foreground could have been removed or the photo cropped.
LL
- Tayon
(1575) - [2007-10-06 4:53]
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Hi RS
fantastic colors POV,DOF and sharpness.
I liked the great composition with the water mainly in the down side of the image, mainly in the wet sand..
well done.
Tayon/Taba
I can't agree with LL - industrial landscapes make great subjects, especially when silhouetted against a sunset sky.
While the log does serve to anchor the foreground quite well, I don't like it's central position.
The slight tilt to the right is a bit of a distraction, and the colours seem quite over-saturated to me, even for a spectacular sunset like this. I'm also not too keen on the square boxy format - try keeping it more towards the classic 3:2 ratio, in landscape or portrait format.
Good attempt, but more attention to framing and less saturation needed in my opinion.
Cheers,
Ben
Perfect colors,great compo and framing.Good work!Seda
excellent colours,well done rschi