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- adam_k
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(596) - [2006-06-21 8:50]
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The situation is quite interesting here... due to the dark background these columns look like lamps...
I think however it would look better if they were not tilted and there would be the same amount of space on the left and right side of them: so talking simply: I would cut the right side therefore putting this man into the middle...
Frank,
You have caught the young priest unawares...
Your choice of Monochrome is very ideal...
However, with Monochrome shots, I like the subject focus to be sharp & a shallow DOF to bring out the content.
Also, The distractions in the frame could have been cropped.
I have added a WS. Hope this helps.
Prem.
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