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Copyright: Noel Macale (noel04) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 17 W: 3 N: 11] (613)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-04-07
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D70 DSLR, Nikon AF 24-120mm f/3.5-5.6D IF AF
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-04-09 12:21
Viewed: 856
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
everyday some children are taken there bath here in bugis mall water feature. its fun and everybody enjoy.
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Many interesting elements in this photo: I like how u caught the steam and the children's standing, colours and sharpness.

Marco

i like these "atmosphere pictures"
welldone !

adorable photo! i like the mist that fades out most of the background. it really creates a mood here. the only thing i might change would be to crop out the little bit of arm on the right.
regards, emily

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  • Ebbe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2752 W: 784 N: 1917] (9515)
  • [2005-04-09 15:22]

Nice colors that stand out from the grey. The group make a fine triangel for the eyes to move around in and that makes the composition strong. I like the legs in the left corner for the way the set the scene as "at the mall" but I would like to crop harder on the right to loose the hand on the edge and get a less centered picture.

You have an awesome portfolio...hard to choose a picture to start...
Lovely composition... a minor point is that arm on right side... that could be easily cloned out..
IŽll be looking forward your posts!!!
Cheers!
Carmem

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