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Old women with girl on park bench.

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mdchachi (1611) 2003-07-11 9:15

Since the background really doesn't add anything to the shot, I would probably go with a panorama-like crop (with longer dimensions so we can see the details better).

Porteplume (3257) 2003-10-05 16:11

I would rather have said: "Women with girl on park bench" ;o)
Wonderful natural scene, nobody seemed to have noticed you and the composition is perfect. It's only a pity it was overexposed and lost some sharpness...

(I read Luko's suggestion and I discovered again your work. So much different styles you have! - I wonder if you are aware of how much pleasure you have offered to many of us here... ;o) - Joyeux Anniversaire & Merci encore!)

Didi (36712) 2003-10-05 16:58

Bonne composition très bien cadrée des "baboochkas" :-)
Les blancs sont un peu surexposés, le léger flou est dû peut-être au scaner.

Good composition tallied very well of the "baboochkas": -) The whites are over-exposed a little, the light blur is due perhaps to the scaner

morganommer (765) 2004-08-11 0:58

great moment.
exposure is not quite right but the moment is perfect.
don't know how to use photoshop that well so cannot give you any advice.

Janice (4386) 2004-11-15 20:59

Hey, I like this - real life - no posing - all natural! I'm know nothing about 'over-exposure' or 'light blur" or '?' - I think you captured it perfectly...

Traveller (667) 2007-05-06 2:17 [Comment]

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