Oranienbaum 2 Photo

Photographer’s Note

I continue to post series of shots made on streets of Lomonosov (former Oranienbum), small town located about 40 km from Petersburg on southern shore of Gulf of Finland. It is Petersburg street leading from railway station to centre of town past market.

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fanni (8733) 2009-06-25 1:02

Hi Vitaly,
íå óñïåâàþ ÿ çà âñåìè ôîòî!:( Íå çíàþ, ãäå íàéòè íà âñå âðåìÿ. Ó ìåíÿ òàêîå îùóùåíèå, ÷òî ÒÅ - ýòî êàê åùå îäíà ðàáîòà. Ê ñîæàëåíèþ, íå âñåãäà íà íåå áûâàåò äîñòàòî÷íî âðåìåíè...

In my opinion, this is an interesting photo, though the composition is rather "complicated", packed with a lot of objects.
This doesn't really look like a "Russian" town, but, after all, it has never had such a look! and shouldn't have, perhaps...
Óæ è íå çíàþ, ìåøàåò ëè ýòà áåëàÿ Ãàçåëü èëè íå ìåøàåò... íî ñëåâà êóñîê âûâåñêè Åâðîñåòè, ìíå êàæåòñÿ, ìîæíî óáðàòü. À òî ñëèøêîì óæ â ãëàçà áðîñàåòñÿ. À âåäü àêöåíò íå íà ýòî?
Ìíå êàæåòñÿ, ìîæíî áûëî áû êàäð è ÷óòü âíèç îïóñòèòü... ÷òîá õîòÿ áû ÷óòü-÷óòü ôóíäàìåíò çäàíèÿ ñëåâà âèäåí áûë. Íî, íàâåðíîå, âïåðåäè áûëî ÷òî-òî, ÷òî ìåøàëî?
Ïðåäëàãàþ âàðèàíò "ñ îáðåçêîé" - ñì. âîðêøîï:)
Áàëüøîîé ïðèâåò èç äîæäëèâîé Ìîñêâû! â òàêóþ ïîãîäó íà ðàáîòó åõàòü íå õî÷åòñÿ.
best wishes,
Elena

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