somewhere beyond the sea Photo

Photographer’s Note

Somewhere beyond the sea,
Somewhere, waiting for me,
My lover stands on golden sands
And watches the ships that go sailing;

Somewhere beyond the sea,
He's (She's) there watching for me.
If I could fly like birds on high,
Then straight to his (her) arms I'd go sailing.

It's far beyond a star,
It's near beyond the moon,
I know beyond a doubt
My heart will lead me there soon.

We'll meet beyond the shore,
We'll kiss just as before.
Happy we'll be beyond the sea,
And never again I'll go sailing!

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Critiques | Translate

vts_ch (2624) 2007-02-20 5:16

Hello,
Nice shoot, full of peacfulness, the only regret is the black line in the middle of the image, quite distracting and the boat is maybe a bit too much to the left.

Nevertheless, nice balance between the see, the sky and the cloud, giving a gret impression

Well done

Vincent

kiwi_explorer (12195) 2007-02-20 5:21

Hello Czaldy,
Simplicity is beauty ... that is how I sum up this composition. Ay pagka romantico man pud diay nimo, Bay. Gi gamit ni nimo ang balak pag Valentines Day ... daghan siguro ang mitukob no :):):) Well done!

cunejo200 (7157) 2007-02-20 6:24

Nindot 'Bay. This composition shows how vast the sea is and yet it is minimalist in approach effectively utilizing negative space. Very artistic and appealing.

manada (6237) 2007-02-20 6:43

Hi Czaldy
Nice essential shot and sensibility

TFS, Freddy

bstreeck (177) 2007-02-20 7:48

Overblown sky, oversaturated water, oversharpend sailboat, overcompressed. Otherwise great...

(Anybody who marked this note as useful must have been joking...)

Mikos (4324) 2007-02-20 13:19

Hi Czaldy my friend!

What an interesting angle, pov, waht an interesting story you tell us with your picture, which seems to me very original. The boat at the left corner, enhances the result highly!

have a great day!

Miguel

marielouitje (256) 2007-07-08 9:37