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Forever Freedom


Forever Freedom
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Copyright: Joscel Pendejito (joscel1975) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 35 W: 0 N: 34] (319)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-03-08
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-10 20:05
Viewed: 1315
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Boracay is one of the finest beaches in the world. People of all races flock-in to enjoy the powder-like coast line and parties of course.

This girl was just so free that day that she jumped it off... and I got her!


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To Davids: Thanksjoscel1975 1 06-11 07:39
To waminda2020: Thanks Markjoscel1975 1 06-11 07:38
To imtiyaz: Thanks for the Feedbackjoscel1975 1 06-11 02:08
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Hi Joscel,

Technically the image is quite good. the angle the the time is simply perfect.

But is the title fits for this image, personally I feel its not, when I see the image at first glance, my eyes moves through the curves of body, not the happiness(freedom) on her face.

Lets come to the title again in other way you said freedom, freedom from what ? take a look of this image. here he says something about freedom in the image. this is called completeness, that what i personally look in the image. sometimes I also failed to get what I said. but as a photographer I feel satisfied when i get these things.

All my words doesn't mean to hurt you but I mean to express my self.

Regards,
Imtiyaz.

Joscel, I like it! I hope we all find reasons to "jump for joy"! thanks for sharing! mark :)

I don't have a problem with the title, and I hope it doesn't put other people off to write critiques.

I am impressed by the timing . . . stunning . . . she's really at the best point of the jump . . . I have a feeling you needed to try a few shots to get this one :)))

wonderful location also . . . must remember to start living there when I can!

thank for the happy moment,
regards,
David

Excellent action shot! I really like this!! Regards, Doug

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  • pelin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 164 W: 130 N: 420] (2192)
  • [2008-07-17 11:47]

hehehe what a cheerful jump, i like it.

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