Photographer’s Note
This picture was taken while we were on a boat going back to Batangas Pier from Puerto Galera. There were these areas on the surface of the sea which were so still, as if there were no waves... So I timed my shot (or tried to) just as we were passing over one of these areas... As you can see there are still some ripples from the wake of the boat. This is my first post on Trek... Comments are welcome and appreciated. Thanks!
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eslmatt
(123) 2007-01-24 19:34
hey Tim,
Honestly, I don't see the point of the shot. As I go through the images in TE, I look to learn about the world. The shot is not something that draws, other than it is your first post.
My suggestion would be to show more of the water and the shore, perhaps some sky, and less of the boat. The transition between the calm and the rough would also be interesting to see. Use as much of the 200K as you can, so we can do workshops on it.
Hope to see more form you
Matt








