Photographer’s Note
This picture was taken in the playhouse. This is the very first picture i uploaded in this site. I am striving to learn how to get good picture and this picture is the best i could get so far (sad). Well, i posted this so i can get comments and advises on what i must do with this picture.
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PaGz
![Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 0 N: 50]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/n-n-s.gif){kind=small}
(496) 2007-11-01 23:12
welcome to trekearth.
there are plenty of websites that tackles photography. Go visit these sites and start reading and applying.
as for the picture,imho, it's not sharp and out of focus. the framing is off. why "apparent"? and the boobs distracted me. try to re-compose the image if you can do this again and see what happens.
keep shooting and extend my regards to the goddesses of the waterfalls of gingoog.
wolf38
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3007 W: 91 N: 1466]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif){kind=small}
(13087) 2007-11-01 23:37
Hello Mercy. A very interesting picture. The actual motive is into a close framework. To see only the really important is, - an apparently intimate scene. However, the photo lives by suggestions and omitting. Really considerably. Best regards, Wolfgang. P.S. Welcomely on Trekearth.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Mercy Grace Puyo (AngelGrace) (2)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-08-25
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/2.8, 1/30 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2007-11-01 18:42
