Photographer’s Note
At the Benedictine Monks retreat house in Baguio City grows the beautiful jade pitcher plant. I especially liked the mood it set me in and I am sharing the same.
photo taken in raw & black and white, no PP.
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stiginthedump
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 133 N: 252]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif){kind=small}
(1823) 2007-05-04 0:50
I think a little closer would have been better here Raul. That way we could have seen a bit more detail of the flower. I don't think that having all that empty space works here and I don't particuarly like that shape (a leaf?) poking through on the right hand side. I also think that a little PP sharpening would help here, maybe a little unsharp mask.
Photo Information
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Copyright: Raul Boncan Jr (voyagenation)
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 96 W: 17 N: 140]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-g.gif)
(1168) - Genre: Places
- Medium: Black & White
- Date Taken: 2007-05-01
- Categories: Nature
- Camera: Nikon D200, AF Nikkor 55-200mm DX 5.6, Hoya UV Filter
- Exposure: f/9.3, 1/250 seconds
- Map: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2007-05-03 23:57
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Points: 3
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by voyagenation, last updated 05-11 11:43
