The Bread Seller

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• thebecky (672)
• [2005-10-13 22:08]

I like this shot, there are so many things going on in the background and it's nicely balanced. The bread looks good too! The only thing I would say is that I wish you hadn't chopped the front guys feet off.

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• weswang (18223)
• [2005-10-14 10:36]

Hi Jonathan, There are some middle eastern style restaurants here in Los Angeles. I do like their fresh baked bread as shown in your picture. I don't see their foot getting so close to their bread though :D
A good man in work scene. Good capture of the tradition, culture and the guy making face in the background. Nice clarity and good sharpness.

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• Cormac (25032)
• [2005-10-14 10:49]

I really like the light in this shot. The main subject is well lit, with the secondary subjects progressively fading into darkness behind him, maybe hinting at multiple layers of culture to be revealed. The positioning of the 3 people is just right, and makes this a very balanced photo. Well done!

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• hmdparsi (476)
• [2005-10-17 5:56]

Dear Jonathan,
I can just tell you : you have a wide view. excuse me if my english is not power or fluently.I like your shot.good DOF & light.but I realy like the guy in the corner.
Regards,
Hamid.

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• nbournas (3126)
• [2005-11-01 13:20]

Very nice enviromental portrait here Jonathan. To tell you the truth the guy in the back caught my eye immediatelly. Very nice shot. TFS.

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• sergio1 (12138)
• [2006-07-03 4:12]

Hi Jonthan,

Magnific shot to the dayli life. I like the portrait and very nice sharp. The scene is great.
Regards
Sergio

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• zips (1937)
• [2006-09-28 8:20]

Very nice photo and good photographers notes. The flooring, wall, and clothing are all interesting. Great lighting as well.

Great Job.
Aloha, JB