School's out Photo

Photographer’s Note

A young schoolgirl returns home through the brick fields.

Many Afghan refugees in Pakistan live in camps around the city of Peshawar, close to the border. These people are often employed in brick factories where they can earn some money.

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brevbrev14 (372) 2008-11-10 11:29

WOnderful image Steve
i can't believe there aren't comment!
the composition is beautiful with the young girl on the top
the image seems a BW with a natural red touch
beautiful textures too
ciao
Valeria
be back

smarcell (14273) 2008-11-19 7:43

I think it is a very interesting idea, and the subject is very strong.
I do not like the large fraction of out of focus bricks in foreground. I think it is a too large part of the frame. I would suggest to crop some part of it.
Regards Stefano