Photographer’s Note
During my visit to North Korea, I was hoping to get some pictures of some North Korean soldiers – but my guides only frowned when I suggested the idea. However, I had a brief photo opportunity (of sorts) when I was at the Kumsusan Memorial Palace which I mentioned in my note to the photograph that I posted yesterday. We were standing near the gate to the Palace – which is a massive gate made of granite and copper – when three soldiers walked up to the gate and posed for a photograph being taken by another soldier. I immediately snapped a couple of wide shots – which my guides didn’t seem to mind – and from that I have tried to make a composition focusing on the soldiers.
The original from which I cropped this was quite underexposed (I had the camera on auto exposure and the very bright light and reflections off the granite, together with the polarizing filter that I had on the lens, seems to have fooled the meter) and it was very contrasty. I have posted the original to the workshop so you can see what I mean. From this pretty awful original, after correcting the tilt and cropping it heavily, I played around with the levels and contrast, but couldn’t get the soldiers to look much more than silhouettes without losing all the saturation in the picture. So I used the PS magic wand to play around with the levels further on the soldiers and reduce the black output, then used the healing brush to adjust the patchiness that was created on the soldiers tunics and faces by the levels adjustments that I made within the area outlined with the magic wand. There is probably a much easier way to do that using layers, but I haven’t taught myself how to use layers yet, so this was the best I could do with my relatively limited PS knowledge.
I have also posted the other wide shot that I took in the workshop so that you can see what the gate looked like as a whole, but I was more interested in focusing on the soldiers than I was on the gate.
REPOST: After uploading the original of this yesterday, I decided I still wasn't happy with it and realised I hadn't spent enough time on PP to make it really work. One of the critiques pointed out it was too 'flat' because there was not enough contrast, but the WS that was done on it made it too 'contrasty' for my personal taste. So I played around with the contrast and saturation a bit more, and came up with this version that I think is an acceptable compromise between my original and the WS. To see the workshops referred to above, you will have to click on the 'Original Version' link first.
gaby, PixelTerror, richtersl, leonorkuhn, fireflyz, berek, L2K, rtome, repaulson, anitaj, pboehringer has marked this note useful
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gaby
(19793) 2005-11-06 3:59
Hi David it's a great but dangerous shot in these special countries (in west africa, you can meet many problems if you take pictures of soldiers).
I like a lot your compo - great my friend
Regards
Gaby
HOBO
(5244) 2005-11-06 4:38
Good morning David,
the cut of the uniform and the type of posing reminds me of those days before the wall in Berlin... The visits in the east, before memorials, sad and fascinating at the same time...
Regards
Knut
Amellia
(1804) 2005-11-06 9:05
witaj David:))
wspaniale uchwycony moment, bardzo podoba mi sie klimat tej fotografi, ¶wietnie go oddaje, ciekawa kolorystyka, jest taka pastelowo delikatna, podoba mi siê, super:))
richtersl
(3544) 2005-11-06 10:15
I got reprimanded in 1979 in Soviet Estonia for doing something similar so I can appreciate how fortunate you were to have had an opportunity like this.
The composition is excellent in terms of what it documents and I don't mind the slight post processing issue at all.
Kenny10pin
(19301) 2005-11-06 10:15
great work here, I like the soldiers here, very well placed soldiers in the picture, well done
PixelTerror
(85994) 2005-11-07 7:53
Hi David,
With no doubt the reworked version is more punchy, good composition given the shooting conditions, looking at this I get the feeling of a shining regime, maybe you could apply to be Kim Jong Il's official photographer... just joking !
I'd do one more PP step here, remove the cut golden element on the top right corner with the clone tool.
Have a nice day,
Jean-Yves
leonorkuhn
(13435) 2005-11-07 12:38
You got a good shot, David. In the past we knew that kind of power. It can be a very dangerous thing. I like this composition.
Well done!
Leonor
sergio1
(12150) 2005-11-07 12:45
Hola amigo
Bonita composición y bonita puesta en escena de los guardias.
Saludos y buen trabajao
Sergio
fireflyz
(2079) 2005-11-07 14:13 [Comment]
berek
(28750) 2005-11-08 4:15
Hi David
very interesting picture. Good composition and POV. Thanks for sharing.
burak
Stepan
(27167) 2005-12-10 5:06
A picture from old times... The PP creates a strong 70's atmosphere, pretty pertinent for this subject.
Really interesting.
Stéphane
pboehringer
(770) 2007-05-11 10:38
I can understand the guide's frowning and still I would have the same desire as you did. After all it seems that you got to fulfill your desire quite well. Although the composition is a very good one the digital quality reminds me to much of a usual snapshot. I see that you did some PP and I think that the compromise is a good one.
TFS, Peter
Photo Information
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Copyright: David Astley (banyanman)
(7716) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2005-09-15
- Categories: Decisive Moment
- Camera: Nikon D100, Nikkor AF-S 12-24mm f/4G ED, Circular PL
- Exposure: f/9.0, 1/320 seconds
- Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2005-11-06 3:50
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