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• AdrianW (2201)
• [2003-05-28 19:00]

Nice shot! There are a couple of PS things I'd suggest to improve it though - I think it would benefit from sharpening, and also I think you could increase the saturation a bit to bring out the colours which are looking somewhat muted at the moment..

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• Darren (6801)
• [2003-05-28 19:59]

I agree with Adrian. This is a nice shot, but it could use some sharpening for certain. Also, perhaps some adjustment in the curves could bring out the details in their faces a little more. In terms of composition, this is excellent. I think the people are perfectly placed, and I find the patterns of the top 2/3s of this to be very appealing.

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• Luko (13701)
• [2003-05-29 7:30]

All previous suggestions would be welcomed, but I'd like to point out that the compo is amazing, as all lines are bringing the eye to the characters which are as Darren noticed exactly positioned.

Muted warm colors are a bonus for me. Just add some sharpness and that would be great.

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• Jani7za (0)
• [2003-09-26 8:36]

I like the composition and lines... just sharpen! but great pic!

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• merhaba (2)
• [2005-05-05 15:30]

it is a nice shot but it can be better to write some information. ex: what do they do?