Seller Girl

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• stevep (552)
• [2007-02-19 4:58]
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hello Derya,

This photo doesnt quite work for me: if a portrait is what you were looking for then a much tighter crop on the woman would easily be preferable. A plain brown wall and overexposed ground does not make a very good backdrop and detracts greatly from any "mood" that might have otherwise been present. Also, her pose is not the most flattering. I think an extreme tight crop just on her face and headress would have been better here.

regards,
steve

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• trebuA (0)
• [2007-02-19 11:57]
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Hi Derya,
As already said this picture is a bit overexposed and the surrounding background doesn't help very much. The strongest feeling in this image is the way the girl is looking towards someone/something. Concequently a very tight crop on her face only, as Steve suggested, doesn't work nice in my opinion because one need some field in the direction she is looking to. I had a try in a workshop but without any certitude. You tell me if you like it…
Regards,
Guy

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• erhan1958 (624)
• [2007-02-20 5:21]

KARŞI IŞIK ANCAK BU KADAR GÜZEL KULLANILABİLİRDİ. TEBRİKLER
ERHAN

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• cessy (13561)
• [2007-02-24 2:18]
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Hallo Derya
very nice portrait of this girl, she is beautiful
I like the light and composition

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• meltt (0)
• [2007-04-07 5:36]

Özellikle renkleriyle ve güzelliği ile kareyi doldurmuş bu satıcı bayan. Sizde fırsatı iyi yakalayıp başarılı bir portre çalışması yapmışsınız. Tebrikler.

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• bduman85 (12)
• [2007-11-08 11:54]

Kızımıza kırmızı çok yakışmış. Güzel bir portre çalışması. Keşke bir kaç tanede yüz fotografı yakalayabilseymişsin. Bayıldım doğrusu.

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• okahraman (3611)
• [2007-12-05 11:45]

Slm Derya
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