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Copyright: Swiatek Wojtkowiak (nygus) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 196 W: 0 N: 597] (7908)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-11
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D70, Sigma EX 18-50 2.8
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-01-24 4:15
Viewed: 764
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I visited a shelther for old and sick people in Amarapura, run by buddists. They live there, spending all day on activities like this. Very quiet and peaceful place.
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SUPERB.............breathtaking......

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  • olli Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1237 W: 995 N: 64] (2091)
  • [2005-01-24 4:44]

Excellent bold composition/tight framing, beautiful light and very effective eye contact make this portrait so excellent and original – bravo.
I just wanted to try this in B&W – posted a WS...

Excellent colors and good DOF, I like the centered sharp cigarette here, he is going to burn his fingers !

very good compo and the colors are very warm! i like the cigarette butt in the middle of the frame!

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  • sengir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 389 W: 51 N: 496] (4905)
  • [2005-01-24 11:56]

hej świetne. troche za mocno przyciąłeś od góry IMO, a tak to pierwsza klasa. Ten gest, ta mina - doskonałe :).

love it. great eye contact, very natural. love how much i can see of the background.

Swiatek
i realy like this composition.
the pose from this guy, his hand
the cigaret, and the gaze.
Everything is perfect for me here.
i like the mood of this picture.
very well done
••simon••

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