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Beautiful seller


Beautiful seller
Photo Information
Copyright: Tom Alisier (alimo3) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 489 W: 112 N: 97] (6680)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1999-08
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon f80, Fuji Velvia 50
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-01-19 15:12
Viewed: 905
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
She was selling reproduction of temple painting so gently.
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To christina: Myanmaralimo3 1 01-19 19:00
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bonsoir
tres belle composition et beau contraste entre la jeune fille et la peinture qu'elle montre.
JP

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  • kikvel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 810 W: 60 N: 1162] (4746)
  • [2005-01-19 16:07]

Hi TOM
nice subject!

I would only crop a bit the top
Nice DOF too
well done my friend

K.

I like the composition Tom. What I'm not sure about, unlike the previous critiques, is wether your DOF is successful or not. At first sight it seems to me that the blurred foreground is more a flaw than something intended by you. Personally I would have prefered to see a deeper DOF, with the whole image in focus. But well..matter of taste I guess.

Lovely composition. I like the flow of the artwork to her cute face. Very nice!

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  • BAKO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 134 W: 75 N: 40] (1665)
  • [2005-01-20 1:33]

Really Nice :)
WellDone

another gorgeous shot from burma, here on te! these wonderful browns seem to be very characteristic of this country and its beautiful and friendly people, i love it! hope to visit this spring. the frame is very well composed, great colors, sharpness (maybe the white edge of the painting is slightly overexposed) and a lovely smile! congrats!

hello Tom
j'aime bcp cette composition
on suit ce dessin pour arriver
droit sur ce magnifique visage
et cette signature " le tanaka"
belle image Tom
••simon••

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  • naret Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 185 W: 0 N: 148] (826)
  • [2005-01-21 21:25]

Sawasdee Khun Tom,
For this one, I like your idea of using the painting as a leading line to her face.
Naret

this is very sweet - her smile and pose with that painting in two hands, very nice compo too, lovely stuff ;)

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