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Rangoon Circle Line


Rangoon Circle Line
Photo Information
Copyright: Marc Marteling (marclu) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 26 W: 19 N: 70] (1110)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-11-07
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation
Camera: Nikon D200, Nikkor AF-S 28-70mm f/2.8
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/100 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-07-14 12:50
Viewed: 305
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A circular train line leeds north out of Rangoon to Insein, Mingaladon and North Okkalapa townships and back to Rangoon again. The ride takes about 3 hours, rather slow, not very comfortable but it's a great way to get a quick overview of the capital. Ticket price is 1 US$ for foreigner, start every 30 minutes at the Central Train Station.
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Hello Marc! This is really good shot. The tram looks like big frame for your models. However they look more bored or tired probably. Well caught moment. I tried to add more sharpness to your image. hope u dont mind,
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pelin

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  • Apex Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 90 W: 0 N: 11] (314)
  • [2008-07-14 13:39]

Hello Marc,
Great photo. Very candid. The compositon and depth of field were well chosen. Nice work.
Jeff

Hi Marc,

Nice and tight framing with that window! The boy clearly saw you, the mother staring away. Nice compo, you can even see that in the blur there were more people who have seen you!
The workshop is a slight bit too sharp for me. I don't mind them being a slight bit on the soft side. Adds to the mood. I might have corrected the top a bit, to get that line of the window a bit more horizontal with the distort option - like being totally in front of the window. But I like this composition a lot!

Greetings,
Dennis

This is a really nice photograph I think, and what really makes it interesting is how well you have captured the young lady in the center and the expression on her face. A really wonderful everyday shot.

I like the various expressions, some have seen you others to deep in thought, very naturally captured with tight feaming

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