Two Little Girls

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• avigur_11 (21172)
• [2003-09-22 10:20]
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great great shot!
Great colors, great composition!.
But the best is their faces. You can almost feel the wind, and see it blowing their hair.
I like the yellow and green strips at the left. Very good choice not to crop them.

and I like the dalmatic dogs from Disney - like saying that the world is getting smaller.

Excellent job! :-D

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• dsidwell (9727)
• [2003-09-22 12:19]
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Wonderful photo! The colors are slightly muted, which I find very appropriate. Their expressions are marvelous, and your composition, with the girls slightly off center, works very well.

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• smael (2874)
• [2003-10-15 14:35]

Very beautiful!!
Good job to have preserved their natural look, while taking a "planed" shot. The Ger is there, thanks to the yellow/green door so this braught back memories...

Terje

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• nwoehnl (60421)
• [2003-10-29 13:41]

Marvelous photograph! Mesmerizingly simple, yet so effective. I love how the girl to the right, while visibly feeling the wind coming from the side, remains so focused on looking into your camera lens. I agree with the others that the yellow/green door to the left tremendously adds to the composition.

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• Curioso (8926)
• [2003-12-29 8:46]

That's a really nice portrait and it's really moving to see such shy little girls.

I guess you could sharpen the picture a little bit to add more impact but that's a really nice portrait !

By the way, I just read your Travellog about this beautiful trip in Mongolia : I appreciate the informative tone and the details. Well done !

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• Jeppe (18564)
• [2004-05-20 7:58]

Very fine and awesome portrait of these two girls - it seams that even on a mongolian desert disney do have some influence of life ;-) Tanks for sharing Mini.

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• anthonyasael (610)
• [2004-11-05 12:38]

Even if they have a very nice pijama, i would have liked to see only the expression on their faces

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• don_narayan (2014)
• [2005-09-20 21:11]

a lovely portrait of these two girls. it is a good shot... you have many, I enjoyed looking through your gallery and I will keep an eye out for more photos from you.

Narayan

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• sarahnatalie (669)
• [2007-07-11 16:14]
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Hi Mimi,
I know this is an old photo, and I am not sure if you are still around, but I really like it and I just discovered it today browsing the Mongolia gallery. I did a workshop. Hope you don't mind.
Sarah