Sail Away

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• foozi (987)
• [2008-04-07 1:25]

Salam Jus,
phew....I like the line of the Penang Bridge..never seen anything like that yet...so slim so clear from distance. the sea is just like the movie "perfect storm" not blue but greenish. Very dramatic piece. i just wish the vessel is a bit small to indicate the vastness of the ocean. Nevertheless it is an astonishing shot.
"the Penang Hunt?"

Regards,
Foozi

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• mikolaj_kawa (12742)
• [2008-04-07 1:27]

Hello Jusni! Amazing ship, wonderful bridge. Interesting point of view. Fantastic perspective. Good composition. Well done!

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• cirano (584)
• [2008-04-07 1:41]

Bi têranî xweşik e.

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• mesutilgim (23087)
• [2008-04-07 1:49]

Hi dear Jusni,
Wonderfull scene, perfect capture !
Very good pov and compo. İnteresting notes as well.
TFS and best regards
MESUT ILGIM

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• KiiT (58)
• [2008-04-07 2:01]

Hello Jusni, what a refreshing moment, nice formation of the clouds, a delicate bridge outlining the horizon, the presence of the water is dominant in your country (or at least in your gallery) too. I also thought you could go wider for this shot but maybe you did not want to dwarf the cargo, then the alternative would be a stitch work adding more ocean on both sides. Since you are using CS3 you could get into that business right away (or so I heard). K.

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• gracious (10928)
• [2008-04-07 2:22]

Abang Jusni,
This is a good pov from the deck to capture the cargo ship heading toward the famous Penang bridge with great depth here!
a good image well shared
p/s email rcvd with thanks will talk to you on next email that send!
best regards
Tony

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• evanrizo (21542)
• [2008-04-07 2:48]

Hi Jusni, the result is very amazing, is excellent.
the bridge is although is far away is very good to see, and makes a very nice composition with the ship it is very good placed.
Regards.
Evangelos

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• belido (8863)
• [2008-04-07 4:29]

Hi Jusni,

great sea shot. You placed the ship perfectly in the frame. The inclusion of the bridge and the horizon line in the first third was a good decision. Colors and lights are really good. Well done!
Regards,
Carlos

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• stego (13956)
• [2008-04-07 4:57]

Hi Jusni,
I like the vastness of the sea, that makes the bridge look perhaps even longer than it is in reality, because we can't see the extremities. The ship is well positioned compo wise and so are the clouds. The inclination of the ship and the curved shape of the bridge produces a curious effect of having a barrel distortion that doesn't exist in reality, but reminds the roundness of earth.
Regards, José.

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• pablominto (28781)
• [2008-04-07 5:47]

Hello Jusni,
The simplicity of the composition is very appealing to me!
The lonely ship setting course for the unknown, for the vast seas ahead...
The bridge in the horizon is a fine element, representing the first stage on the trip!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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• jurek1951 (14161)
• [2008-04-07 8:39]

Hi Jusni,
Beautiful seascape. Well exposed and nice color clarity image. POV and composition are great. Very well done.
Jurek

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• pboehringer (18442)
• [2008-04-07 9:13]

Jusni,
a terrific composition! The cargo ship at the left heading out and the bridge with the arches at the right side gives an excellent sense of depth despite nothing else there besides the water and the horizon topped by clouds.
Peter

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• siamesa (4812)
• [2008-04-07 10:18]

Hi Jusni,
Very beautiful and distant bridge. Lovely composition and amazing image.
Regards
Maria

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• Clementi (20249)
• [2008-04-07 14:31]

Ciao Jusni ,
nice shot , I like the line of the Bridge,
the ship on the left is fantastic ,
very nice colors and good clarity.
well done
Giorgio

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• trekks (7571)
• [2008-04-07 15:36]

hi Jusni

I like how you frame the suspended bridge from afar and use it a horizon, including the boat as subject. Well done technique.

TFs, bill

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• lousat (4519)
• [2008-04-07 16:00]

Hi Jusni,simply baeutifull,very nice under all corners of view,my best compliments,Luciano

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• aadilj (9595)
• [2008-04-07 22:58]

you've been doing inspired work that has been such a lovely sight to behold. great work indeed with perfect composition

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• cfreire (7569)
• [2008-04-08 4:42]

Hi Jusni
Beautiful shot and interesting composition because we see a kind of sky with soft colors and we just look to the left, the ship of warm nice colors appeared. Beautiful. Good work. Regards, Consuelo

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• basithry (355)
• [2008-04-09 4:58]

Doubtlessly a perfectly placed ship in frame is the source of attraction.Water looks beautiful with ship on it.Nice one.

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• Angshu (24514)
• [2008-04-09 20:57]

Hello Jusni
The span of the massive bridge in the BG, without it's ends being visible makes this very attractive. The cargo ship, slightly at an angle is balalnced by the twin triangles of the suspensions of the bridge. Very well composed & captured with perfect sharpness.
Best Regards
Angshu

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• zmey (4283)
• [2008-04-14 7:59]

hello, jusni

i like your beutiful composition and the sai-away mood, however, i feel the filter (i think, that's the cause)is taking too much away from the bottom part of your photo in terms of light, details and clarity, while doing a good job on the sky. i suspect, some sort of graduated filter solution would produce a better result here.

with warm regards,
kristaps