Made in Heaven

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• EastOfAcropolis (25)
• [2006-09-26 10:13]
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• eugeneahn (298)
• [2006-09-26 10:20]

This is a gorgeous wedding photo. Well seen. Composing the image tight gives a sense of intimacy. And the way you captured the light is brilliant. One thing that seems distracting is what appears to be a plant in the upper lefft corner. Some would say this is part of the scene and you had no choice but to leave it to capture this wonderful composition. Others might suggest you remove it in postproduction (Photoshop). Just something to consider as a photographer. Either way it doesn't change the fact that this is a great photograph.

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• ksvijayb (381)
• [2006-09-26 10:58]

Hi,
A photo very well taken.

TFS,
Vijayabaskar

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• Jeweller (1256)
• [2006-09-26 20:01]

This is an excellent wedding photo. Good composition and excellent exposure. Well done.

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• rabani (9103)
• [2006-09-26 21:26]
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Dear DA,
Adakalanya apabila saya baca komen atau kritik orang tentang sesuatu gambar, macam tidak betul saja. Sengaja bah cari kesilapan atau pun mahu dapat point balas hanya dengan memberi komen batuk tangga saja. Contohnya komen member kita yg pertama itu.

Saya macam mahu melotot mata bah, mahu cari itu plant yang ada di korner kiri atas gambar kamu. (Bayangkan saya punya skrin computer sudah cukup calibrate pun susah mahu tengok. Sebelum kita komen atau kritik, kita perlu tengok imej yang kita hendak kritik itu, melalui skrin komputer lain) Kalau ada pun tidak beberapa jelas dan tidak perlu diubah atau diedit. Hanya apabila sesuatu itu mengganggu dengan JELAS baru lah edit. Kalau tidak tidak perlu bah.

Ok bah gambar kamu. Begitu juga cara kamu. Pakai flash kena bertempat dan pancarannya bersesuaian. Perlu di ingat DA, perkahwinan adalah episod yang terpenting dalam hidup seorang wanita dan wanita paling cantik dalam episod itu adalah pengantin perempuan. Ambil yang terbaik dan ambil juga yang terbanyak mungkin. Untuk jadi seorang photographer yang baik, bukan hanya perlu expert dalam teknik dan gear. Most of the time, kamu kena "expert" dalam event yang kamu shooting itu.

Aramaiti

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• rewshearer (682)
• [2006-09-26 23:04]

Beautiful light and colours, this is a very intimate and emotionally warming shot.
A lovely bride.
Thanks for sharing
Rew

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• SunsuriGipan (28)
• [2006-09-30 13:00]
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My first look to this photo: Love at first site..lol, in my amateuristic opinion, it is almost perfect. Taken at the right angle, the objects have the perfect mood and what impressed me most is where the light falls at the right intensity. It is unfortunate that the little white flower on the veil lies right on the lips of the bride, otherwise looks angelic, as the title says, made in heaven. (Miagal gia di do kisini topurak - tapi memang hibat la ko gambar).

My second look: ..eh. ididi..iyooii.. dia pula tu, sikit lagi inda kanal bah. DA, if you are her bro in law, ko monongiwan pula sa..

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• andreng (261)
• [2006-11-14 2:14]
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Nairelav,
Not too sure what camera you were using but the exposure came out alright on the main subject. There were some comments about the leaf, but it is hardly visible here. If I was going to print out this shot for your friend, I may want to do some WS and take out that leaf if it comes out too prominantly in the print. I would have also adviced Sybilla to change to a different veil. The white flowers in the veil are not good for a photographer and actually should not be place at her face level. They may look nice but does nothing to the photograph as it blocks out areas, like for this case her lips. Taking wedding photographs is a challange some times, I had a friend who was contracted to take wedding photographs for a Datuk but somehow something went wrong and some of the shots was spoilt, you can imagine what happened then. But this should not keep you from improving you skill for taking function shots. TFS Andre