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Hangout place
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Copyright: chai TY (chaity) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 437 W: 16 N: 332] (1534)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-10-20
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Canon Eos Rebel 300 D, 50 mm 1.8
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-10-24 3:00
Viewed: 564
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
In Kuala Lumpur, there is a place called Brickfields. It is just a walking distance to places like Dayabumi or Central Market. Over here, you can find a lot of worship places and YMCA celebrating its 100 years.
I will post some of the photos in TE.

8:57AM - While passing by the main road, I saw this flock of pigeons resting on top of this building. I found this amusing and took this shot in the middle of the road on top of the road divider. It was a gloomy day and would rain anytime.

This photo is cropped to focus on those pigeons. Adjusted brightness and contrast.

You can see the whole building here

Do give your critiques and constructive comments on how to make this photo looks better.
Thanks.
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Hi Chai,
You captured very well these pigeons on the roof top, and have a great timing catching the flying one with complete open wings. Very well framed and good contrast.
Regards,
Ricardo

Hi Chai,
I like the way you have capture that pigeon flying just under that line of pigeon on the roof. Nice capture.
Luc

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  • rabani Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1330 W: 1 N: 3159] (9147)
  • [2005-10-24 20:44]

I don't see how any better could be done to this photo Chai. Your composition shows that it was a gloomy day from the light gray sky, and the pigeons were crowding the rooftop of an exhausted building. You also have gotten the lead to this photo. The pigeon seemingly, gliding down toward you.

very nice work here, I like the row of pigeons and also the one flying towards the camera, well seen and a good capture

Hi Chai, A good catch of the flying bird with nice and graceful gesture. Good to include many other pigeons as companion to the flying one. Nice contrast to see the outline of the lines of the birds on the roof. It looks that they feel at home to stay there. A nice and clear capture.

Hi Chai,
A nice subject for a shot and having one bird in flight is just great. I thought I just do a WS for the fun of looking at it with a different crop, something I seldom do due to time constrain. It does have some room for a bit of manipulation. Nicely seen!!! Regards.

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