Fish Farm

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• ribeiroantonio (12338)
• [2008-02-20 22:10]

Looking at your picture it appears that the lake is quite large and located in a hilly area. The boat, being so small in the picture, adds to the idea that the lake could be big. The hazy background is nice and places the scene in the early hours of the morning. Well done.
Antonio

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• mehmetemin (5418)
• [2008-02-20 22:20]

Hi Jusni
interesting composition with excellent colours and light.
regards
Mehmet Emin

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• ChrisJ (52933)
• [2008-02-20 22:42]

Hi Jusni

I like the immensity of the bg mountain & the sea, against the small fihing boat. Good flattened perspective from the zoom, with excellent sharpness. Tfs!

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• trekks (4759)
• [2008-02-20 22:44]

hi jusni

Even though it is a bit mono-tone and dull, I like the blur hazy BG to give highlight to the boat. The photo does look a bit plain without much subject of interest, but it is nicely shot. Just my viewpoint which you may not agree, a closer shot may show more livelihood of the fisherman?

TFS, bill

TFS, bill

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• JPlumb (2734)
• [2008-02-20 22:50]

Hi Jusni, I like this kind of shot, this is a seemingly simple composition, but there's a lot going on here.

The simple part is with the single fisherman in that warm light set perfectly in the bottom left of your frame to anchor the shot. A counter to him is the forest on the right across the water. Then the shot starts to grow into the second level with the water contrasting against the forest covered hills. These are enshrouded in a fog which lets them build one on top of the next, until we get to that mauve foggy sky. From a technical point of view I have to ask, do you use levels, as I would think this might hurt your fog and the effect?

Thanks, John

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• evanrizo (20762)
• [2008-02-20 23:36]

Hi Jusni, it is ideal framed and the lightness makes it nice atmospheric.
Cheers
Evangelos

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• aadilj (7372)
• [2008-02-21 0:58]

Superb texture play and wonderfully layered shot with fine colours and superbly balanced views. I like the composition

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• siamesa (3108)
• [2008-02-21 8:59]

Hi Jusni,
I like very much these watercolors of your photo. Excellent Pov and a fantastic view of mountains.
Regards
Maria

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• gracious (7474)
• [2008-02-21 9:28]

Abang Jusni,
Excellent pov here with good depth of the image!
I loved the line of trees with the good light, looks so soothing from the whole composition!
a very pleasing presentation with a good informative notes
terima kasih
Tony

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• rabani (8927)
• [2008-02-21 19:56]

Dear Jusni,
I just saw this post after I'd uploaded mine. Feeling there's something similar in subject matters and its placement with my Wide Blue work.

Your colors and the vignette seems to have successfully given the effect it needs to draw the attention to what it painted.

Bani

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• Angshu (21966)
• [2008-02-25 0:34]

Hello Jusni
I like this one...except for the noise in the BG, like your compo, with the layers created by the hills against the pastel sky. The anchor of the shot is of course the fisherman & his boat lit by the warm light & placed well in the bottom left of your frame. The landscape is quite immense & you've done a good work here!
Best Regards
Angshu

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• elihesamian (25667)
• [2008-02-25 22:08]

Jusni,
You invited us to look at a special view with an attractive mystrious atmosphere !
What a light !
Like this warm tonalities with the semi hazy condition in far.also the boat as a great point in the composition has a special strong in it,it show itself powerly and this is because of your very good composition,nicely done
Best wishes
M

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• shevchenko (3150)
• [2008-03-04 21:12]

Hi Jusni,
Good pov to show the natural scenery in many layers from the water to reach the sky, nice to see a peaceful environment, harmony atmosphere to show fishermen daily life, thanks for sharing.
Ally