blue window Photo | TrekEarth

Photographer’s Note

This blue window are captured while waiting the traffic light turn to green. Just passing by a small village town were most of the building were build early 1940. So by putting great colour make the building 'alive' again.

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shihwei (238) 2004-06-09 1:15

Cool. =) I wonder how it gonna looks like if the whole shadow is included.

cgrindahl (6109) 2004-06-09 2:15

I love the colors and the bold geometric shapes in the image. However, the slice of color in the upper right hand corner adds nothing to the image and would be better removed even if it means cropping the window a bit tighter. In fact, I'd like to see the right edge of the shadow cut across the corner of the image, which would solve the problem at the upper right as well. It was fortunate you had your camera available to capture this image. Keep shooting and keep posting, that is the formula for improving your eye and your presentation skills.

elroyie (2750) 2004-06-09 3:25

The colours are wonderful and the idea is great but the composition, I think, is wrong.
You should put the window on the left side of the frame, because:
1. The window goes to the right.
2. you cut the shadow that go to the right.
3. you cut the window's roof that also go to the right.

Mrg (823) 2004-06-29 16:06