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holes-malacca
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Copyright: Yohanes Riyanto (yohaneseko) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 3] (109)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-06
Categories: Architecture
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-01-20 20:23
Viewed: 951
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
These holes are typical features of old chinese shop houses in Malacca-Malaysia.
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  • Carlo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 101 W: 0 N: 14] (250)
  • [2005-01-20 20:36]

Fantastic shot. The off-center positioning of the POV and the woman with respect to the circles work well together and seem to add dimension.

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  • kivar Gold Star Critiquer [C: 69 W: 0 N: 8] (136)
  • [2005-01-20 20:36]

great idea there and well realised. the b&w is a good choice. maybe the subject is a little too dark but its not a big mistake... love that!

very good composition. the POV of good too. agree with kivar, the old man is too dark , but no harm to this picture, since the composition is the key element.

Interesting shot. I like the dynamism of the perspective, and the woman who brings life to the compo.
Good choice of b&w. Good first post.
Welcome to TE, regards

for a first image I must say it'sa success. I love your composition in it. Your note is also very interesting, didn't know a bout this kind of architecture. the fact that you have included a a human element is also very nice..
Like this shot.

lovely composition, great human element (man? woman?). i prefer my b&w more contrasty, but that's personal style choice.

very original shot, good composition with those holes and the man inside, nice B&W, interesting work

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  • Ebbe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2723 W: 784 N: 1893] (9391)
  • [2005-01-29 5:24]

A fine repetition of the holes and the man makes the picture.

I like the straight door edge his holding on to. It is a nice geometrical contrast to the circles. It also adds a dynamic effect by showing that the man is leaving. On top of that it adds tension and makes us curious by covering half his face.

photos like this I like much:) well done

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