The gils were listening a group in a place.
I know that I have to cut the top of the picture, but it become to short to publish it in the website.
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olli (2091) 2003-11-28 4:31
Very well seen. I think that the most important thing of shooting is the subject/idea – and I like it alot in this image. I like how the girls are watching the boys of the band in the background. I also like the combination of various colors in clothes – side by side.
I think the image needs some adjustments in PS – and yes, also I would crop it tighter. I posted a WS so you can see what I mean...
manny (21833) 2003-11-28 4:38
Simple yet charming! I like the colours and the concept of this shot! I also like Olli's workshop.
boof (634) 2003-11-28 4:45
Ot seems that a workshop has already been done on the things I would have done as well. Nice photo and I like the colors with all the women sitting there. I agree with how the WS was cropped as well. In addition I think maybe bluring the background a bit will help to make the women stand out.
Eagle78 (1933) 2003-11-28 6:27
Great moment here! you captured it very well!
Like the colors too!
I share "olli" opinion and liked the workshop but think that the frame is too big..
joso (2417) 2003-11-28 6:43
Very well seen, Mireille.
I like the opposition in this photo: one side the colourfull socalled thirdworld, the other side the grey, bombastic, but "civilized" one.
I'm not sure, maybe if you would made a few steps to the right you could have had as background just the stairs; you've had the band still there.
avigur_11 (22107) 2003-11-28 7:56
Wonderful colorfol shot. I totally agree with Olli's WS. I like the DOF and the amazing puzzle of colors.
dob_31 (0) 2003-11-28 9:18
J'aime bien la "pose" de ces filles très "Colorama". Les musiciens que l'on devine me plaisent aussi. Le flou sert bien à la mise en évidence. Bien vu!
wideangle (72) 2004-09-30 22:54
it made me smile :)
cottalorda (140) 2004-11-23 8:03
Les filles sont sympas, mais j'aurais aimé pouvoir observer aussi les musiciens ! Une prise de vue plus haute aurait pu, je pense, y arriver !