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Innocence


Innocence
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Copyright: Philip Jinks (jinksy) (38)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-05-06
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix F610
Exposure: f/4, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-06-13 15:13
Viewed: 746
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Riding in a rickshaw in Georgetown on the island of Penang when some movement caught my eye. A quick shot caught this image. Especially like the expression on the girls' face.
Have cropped this from the centre of a slightly larger image and enlarged this portion approximately 30% to emphasise the subject. Hope it worked.

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To GrahamB: Workshopjinksy 1 06-13 16:24
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Hi Philip

You have captured a great pose and expression on this little gril along with some nice pastel colours on the walls.
For me the area behind the girl is a little cluttered and although the plant there balances the one at the front the yellow tub it is planted in is too distracting. I think your shot would be even stronger if you cropped that part away. I will do a workshop to see if it works.
Nice work.

You definetly caught her in a cute pose...she seems to be surprised that you are taking her picture! Very cute.

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