Kluang mosque Photo

Photographer’s Note

Apparently both of the friends were waiting for Sembahyang(prayer) under the shade of a tower clock to avoid scorching sun.

P/S Press F11 for full screen :)

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ewanshamsudin (345) 2007-10-31 8:11

The colour is nice but this shot would have worked better if more emphasize is given to the subjects waiting under the shade and of course, the tower itself.

A quick look at a basic photography guide under the 'composition' chapter would help you here.

ls7902 (6412) 2007-10-31 10:55

The title of the photo gives the viewer a certain kind of expectation which may not be what you wanted when you clicked that button. Change the title to the clock tower of a mosque or whatever ... then the two friends there are just human elements, & a sense of scale device. Anyway, good shot & composition with the path on the right a good entry point. Excellent exposure. The slight lens distortion is good here. It gives a more dynamic feel to the photo. Maybe finding a slightly different angle would be better to avoid placing the tower too close to the center ... but I think the "tilt" of the tower is compensating for that. Best regards. Latiff.

JanD (15303) 2007-11-05 2:56