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gringofil (0) 2003-05-16 9:28
Another good one, Daniel! Nice that you placed your subject off centre. The muted colors work very well. Good work on this one and can't wait to see more!
Porteplume (3458) 2003-05-16 12:13
As Fil said it's mostly nicer to place the subject (a little) out of the center, but I think this shot could also perfectly fit in a square shape, because the right side is too empty. It seems to me like it misses some balance now... Maybe cropping half of that right part?
But anyway, this attractive portrait earns "a big smile".
yuricle (936) 2003-05-16 13:24
The only disadvantage is the background right under the heads: pity it's brighter than the right part, so the woman face a bit disappearing.
clodreno (0) 2003-12-16 3:57
I love the way you framed this picture. on the left. The woman's seem lost, but the baby is still full of hope. Nice shot.
- Copyright: daniel lavi (evilren) (1395)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2002-03-00
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Canon EOS 300, 28-105 f/3.5-f/4.5, @ ISO 200
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Theme(s): Mother and Child, BabyWearing [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2003-05-16 6:13