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• s10001in (1454)
• [2006-09-02 11:10]

Mark ,
Soild View with strong dynamism.
Nice focus on legs & printed fabric near knee.
rest charcters are also intresting in the shot.
Well done.
-Shailendra

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• Darren (6797)
• [2006-09-02 13:08]

I remember this village. This is better than anything I managed, I think we both were fighting the sky here. I wish that you had either focused on the jumping girl, or shown some face of the girl closest to the camera. As it is now, the jumping girl seems to be the subject, yet she is not the one in focus.

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• designsoul (21332)
• [2006-09-02 16:41]

Szia Mark, nekem tetszik ez a pov, az elulso kislany, ahogy gugol, es a masik, aki szinte repul az ugrokotel folott. Tele van a kep orommel es gondtalansaggal, amit csak a gyerekek ismernek. Nagyon szepek a szinek is. Darennel ellentetben, engem nem zavar a motion blur, dinamizmust latok benne.
Szia!
sasa

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• everlasting (9487)
• [2006-09-02 17:23]

Why do you need cheering up Mark? This is a real actiobn packed image, and so nice just simple games that amuse the children. Excellent POV was it your turn to skip next?

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• Luko (13481)
• [2006-09-02 17:30]

Excellent POV, Mark, kids of different sizes intricated into the bigger's limbs (jumping girl below the foreground girl arms, her legs sheltering the second kid holding the rope), like a matriochka principle.

Perhaps a little too much contrast and saturation : I would rather see Simon like color processing with more muted soft but warm yellowy tones.

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• Furachan (0)
• [2006-09-02 19:29]

Beautiful compo, Mark, anchored by that huge figure on the left. Really la you ecided to post this one.
Excellent work,
Francis

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• Mingfang (1415)
• [2006-09-03 5:10]

Cool, the composition draw my eyes so much, i cant resist it. very brave composed. can see you are trying to do some different to break the old.

Very nice work.
Cheers.

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• kajspice (4495)
• [2006-09-03 15:18]

love that big foot. This is jam-packed with action with each person having something different to offer. Such an under-rated picture. Its one that I will come back to look at again for sure. Love the postures throughout the picture...

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• nastasia (49)
• [2006-09-12 11:31]

Beautiful Photo! Amazing colors and very dynamic! I love it!

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• Angshu (24514)
• [2006-10-18 4:20]

Hello Mark
Fascinating photo...makes me feel that I'm sitting right next to the girl in the FG. The excellent POV provides wonderful interplay between the subjects and all are clearly demarkated and visible. There is dynamism in the centre which is framed by static subjects. The only thing I'm a bit flummoxed is your focussing...who is the main subject here? You would of course be the much better judge for that!
Regards
Angshu