Night market #2 Photo

Photographer’s Note

They are basically competitors for sale but on the other hand good friends in school.

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fanni (8737) 2009-06-25 1:24

Dear Takero,
hmmm... I can't really see so far what was your preference when taking this shot: either these two girls in focus, or the goods for sale behind them? In my opinion, judging by the few words in your Note, you wanted to place the main accent on these two friends. A very lovely portrait of the girls, I should say! I like the difference in their characters which is clearly seen in this photo.

Concerning the "technical" aspect of this photo... It seems to me that the girls sort of "get lost" against the colourful background which takes a lot of space in the photo thus preventing the viewer from seeing the essence of it. Besides, the girls are in the very centre, though I don't mind "centered" portraits...

I would humbly suggest my variant of the photo - the cropped version :) See the Workshop, please.
Warm regards,
Elena

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jhm (82679) 2009-06-25 4:52

Hello Takero,

I think that you with these picture two compositions want show.
The two innocent lovely girls, also the drawings behind the girls. Nice composition and good presentation.
Very well done, TFS.

Warmest regards,
John.