This pic is a little soft but I like the expressions these two sisters have.
The girl in front was such a spaz (she was great fun!). It started to rain and she became quiet and sat on my porch with her sister. That's when I quickly snapped this shot.
As soon as I posted this I decided it was wrong. This could be better... so I reposted a new version as a workshop. It's got a link on this page (just left of this note).
Tell which you prefer.
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dawekato (2269) 2003-11-04 16:38
Hello, Alex. This is a great candid portrait. Good catch light in the eyes. I like the extreme close-up and the one girl's hand on the right. You're right, though, I would prefer for the girl on the left to be sharper. But my main quibble is the heavy border which overpowers the subjects. An image like this doesn't need a border, or if it does, try something thinner.
ninadev (5377) 2003-11-04 17:49
Lovely portrait. I find your composition great, I like this tight framing and these nice eyes looking at you. They are not really posing, they are just curious. Maybe a little soft, mainly on the girl in front, but not that much that it would ruin the pic. I agree with Eva that the frame is too much, especially with that color. I made a WS to try to correct the sharness a little.
maciekda (19895) 2003-11-04 18:13
beutiful picture, very warm... the way they are looking at you or your camera is really captivating, really nice shot!
odin972 (34) 2003-11-04 18:29
on vois bien l'expression du visage et surtout cette lumiere qu'elle ont dans les yeux
Kenny10pin (19301) 2003-11-04 18:51
Great picture, however, it is the sharpeness that is holding it back for another point.
But lovely expressions. The border is a bit thick too.
Curioso (9271) 2003-11-04 23:10
I wonder if the picture is not slightly out of focus. Still, you captured a superb face. On top of that, your composition is really interesting with both girls trying to look closer at you if I understand well. Nice color framing too which enhances the impact of the scene, of their eyes. I love this shot !
padam (186) 2003-11-05 1:54
Really an excellent portrait. Framing is perfect (but not the frame). So much warmth. I take the liberty to post a WS.
jrj (34843) 2003-11-05 6:00
Beatufil pic., well composed and framed.
steeve (1497) 2003-12-25 7:36
Amazing portrait. The expression of their eyes says a lot. It could be interesting to run the pic in neat image and then use unsharp mask with P.S. Great job Alex.Merry XMas & a Happy New Year.
edonato (253) 2004-02-26 15:13
Love this type of pictures.....those eyes a soooooo deep almost a peek at their souls. Thanks !
jrzufferey (7305) 2004-08-22 9:01
Magnifique ce duo, le portrait est très bien construit et l'image est chaude et douce.J'aurai peut-être essayer de faire la mise au point sur le premier penfant plutot que sur le second mais j'aime bien aussi. Amicalement/jr
mikoyen (1180) 2004-09-27 18:56
Very nice picture Alex, very soft, and the light is perfect exposed.
alimo3 (6854) 2004-12-21 18:28
one of my favorite from your all album.
warm and sensitive double portrait.
nice compo and great expression.
- Copyright: alex felipe (RandomCameraGuy) (3071)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2003-02-15
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-LC20, Digital
- Exposure: f/2.8, 1/32 seconds
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Theme(s): Enfants, Beautyful people [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2003-11-04 16:19