six windows on the brick wall Photo

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six windows on the brick wall, trees with blossoms...

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Aragon1981 (275) 2008-12-05 2:36 [Comment]

fanni (6920) 2008-12-05 15:33

Dear Akihisa,
what is this brick wall part of? Is it a school? small factory? Interesting windows. This is the case when, looking at your photos, I would like to know more about the objects in your photo.
I like the lighting, the combination of the white flowers on the trees (especially on th right tree) and the girl's white jacket.
The crop on the left seems a bit too tight (I'd like to see more of the tree on the left). But on the whole, very nice! Very pleasant impression!
kind regards,
have a nice day!
Elena

jorgi (3790) 2008-12-07 1:39

Dear Akihisa,

wonderful photo with so many beautiful elements:
the brick wall as a canvas for 6 dark windows and white stones
blossoming trees of complex shape as an opposite to straight wall
a mysterious girl in white jacket that flirts with blossoms and skirt that mixes with bricks...
all 3 different motives yet in perfect harmony to each other.
Watching the girl...it seems to me that she is talking to a tree and the wall...Those two windows on the right and the tree between them...it feels like a face and she is talking to it...

Wish you pleasant sunday,
Jeri