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Live toys for kids those stay at 1200Mts. Height in Tokyo.
In same Tokyo, where kids hardly move away from PC & Video game.

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berek (29115) 2007-09-08 22:52

Hi Shailendra,
lovely dog's. I like this daily life atmosphere and your composition. greetings. from Istanbul
Burak

sidstakes (770) 2007-09-08 23:39

I like your idea behind taking this photograph, really most kids nowadays are stuck to the pc playing games...kind of alienation happening all around...what am i talking about, even i am stuck to the pc!

Luko (13902) 2007-09-09 1:28

That is a splendid one, Shail, Kipling's Mowgli raised up by an animal family. There's something like a visual parallel between the dog and the little girl crouching.

Just crop out the upper right corner.
(booh for your title!!!... I also caught Evren lax about his titling, is that a anti-furachan reaction ;D...)

goodwill (4033) 2007-09-09 2:29

Marvellous piece of photography Shailendra Ji.
The shot intself is informative and live in every sense.
Well Done.
Rajeev

Furachan (0) 2007-09-09 2:35

Cute pic with that low, low POV that works prety well. Not 100% sure about your choice of placement for focus but the overall effect is truly orginal. Once again you have managed to bend reality to your exigencies and made the scene your very own.
-F

Brian (1) 2007-09-09 19:03

Now this is something different Shail. I saw this earlier this morning, but just didn't have the time to sit down and write.
Enourmous composition going on. Every living creature is poised in a different direction. None can miss a thing. The thing is, I'd rather have the focus on the Mom Dog rather than the daydreamer drifting off. Very cute, and different.

ninaL (19646) 2007-09-09 22:18

Hi, Shailendra.
Interesting scene...
But I don't like this quality...
You can ask me "What the quality means"...
I don't tell about "rules of quality"...
I am not against searching of something of interesting "out of rules". But what I can see here about quality, is no interesting...Is just a photo with a lot of licks : sharperness, light...
And this composition, Shailendra...
What is original in this big desorder ?
Desorder can be interesting...but here ?
I can't see, I am really sorry.
I think this scene could be a very good material for a very good photography.
Best regards again. Grazyna.

faubry (32511) 2007-09-10 1:46

very beautiful photographoe with this dreamning girl and dogs... a atmospher composition,
well done
francine

prantik (1134) 2007-09-11 5:33

Hey Shail

How ar eyou? Haven't commented in your gallery in a while although I regularly check your pictures with lot of interest. More than 5 points or not, I appreciate your unabashed quest for originality and excellence. Keep it up. This is a really good composition, you nailed it. I have been noticing that you have been trying to create highly complex layered compositions lately and you hit the mark with this one, I think. While some of your other pictures, despite the valiant effort, somewhat lacked power and were weaker both in technicality (balance-shalance, etc.) and content, this one is very mature on both counts. This scene inspired you. If I may suggest, let the street and the world around you inspire your composition, don't force your pre-conceived style force the composition. Just my unsolicited 4 cents :)

Agree with Luko, cropping the top right corner would help.

Best bro

P

pcp (3368) 2007-10-30 4:08

HI Brother :)

Nice image with very good composition and colors. I take a round in your gallery and you have some good collections and interesting :)

Some elements are distracting me and i don't want to just pin pointing and i rectified in workshop. i hope it will be useful for you.

> Top right side legs and hands are unwanted.

> Lower side half face dog face, what makes the difference in the picture ??

See my version in your workshop.

TFS

Senthil

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teutza (10568) 2008-01-20 8:04

hehe this is a good one..u know in most of the pictures in motion or not you can see The Moment..that moment that the photographer wanted to capture when the world just stoped for a little...in your image it's all about action..and i think it's still moving when i look at it:) i think this is your new style about...catch the move and keep it in motion:)
hugs
teo