School Girls Photo

Photographer’s Note

Shibuya

Bad camera and bad shot. But I like ^^

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arjun_das (1850) 2006-08-12 10:59

good attempt but unfortunately your main subject is out of focus. you should have used more high value for shutter speed. but i like the tilted framing.

best wishes,
arjun

francbois (480) 2006-08-12 11:04

Hi Pierre, & Welcome!
That's a really good attempt, and satisfying on the whole. I say this kind of on behalf of the confirmed who might come and tell you what's missing... and what's promising: this is what I see!
Dynamic effect, that enthralls all the picture. The schoolgirls look what they should: frightened as if from a Screamsome movie.
Such a terrific shooter! Woah!
Si tu préfère... je peux répéter... lol
Tiens bon la rampe, F'

christian_v (801) 2006-08-12 13:51

Bonsoir Pierre.
Ne dites pas « mauvaise photo ». Vous avez fait LA PHOTO, c’est ce qui importe le plus.
Il n’y a pas de « mauvais appareil photo ». L’appareil n’a fait que transmettre votre émotion du moment…
Le plus important est que vous aimiez votre photo, elle est à vous et elle fait partie de vos souvenirs.

Amitiés
Christian

Klapaucius (623) 2006-08-14 7:21

Hi Pierre,
Welcome to TrekEarth! ^_^

It is a 'bad shot', but I think I like it too. The angle is odd but cool. The two girls are interesting but they are out of focus, which is bad.

The lighting is very nice, I think. It adds to the feel of the image, along with the blurriness and that weird angle.

This is a cool photo. It is interesting to see, and is a good attempt.

Top marks for effort and for being brave enough to post this. It is very different.

Regards,
Richard

^_^