Salaryman after work Photo

Photographer’s Note

Salaryman drinking beer after work.

Image : crop, levels.

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AdrianW (2241) 2004-02-13 19:10

Nice shot! I like the way you've captured them relaxing after a hard day at the office. I might consider cropping the script in the top left hand corner though, I find it draws the eye away from your composition. I also wish it were just a little bit sharper, but it looks like your subjects moved so there wasn't a great deal you could do about that ;-)

mrcrow (3989) 2004-02-14 11:27

this is jolly ..udun and tempora..and a beer..
it has a feeling of welcome and human-ness which makes the viewer want to be a part of the action..
me too!..the general clutter adds to the atmosphere of the scene. the slight unsharp/movement says life is alive..:)

genem (303) 2004-02-16 22:07

Cool shot! You've managed to reflect the mood of these guys. It's a pain to look at this picture in the office :) (which proves your success)

MiguelP (14324) 2005-10-21 14:27

Very japaness moment. Life in Japon turns around job so much that they seem to have no other life. I like the idea of the photo Nadia, in the other hand they look so much like aware of you taken it that makes the outcome to lose magic. Good try.